>"Yeah! You said this one wouldn't cake on my coat, and uh, I kinda stopped listening at 'cake'," >between the baked bandit and the damsel in a dress. >dumbfounded both that Pinkie would leave such a crucial step to Pinkie Pie. >"No, silly, I have a tray!"
Seriously. This is both amazingly funny and sappy and sweet. This whole chapter.
*Cough* Twilight's List being one of the greatest published pieces of literature of all time *Cough*
Again, I loved this chapter, I noticed again that the story was good enough that clop wasn't needed, I think Applejack SHOULD have just let Twilight help in the first place, for Rarity's sake... That poor, innocent dress...
But most importantly this chapter, despite all the tragedy and drama, made me happy and my heart feel warm and fuzzy. It was lovely.
The tragic part though is how explaining to other people how amazing FiM fanfiction can be is...About as straightforward as styling Rainbow's mane.
The end? I loved this more than Pinky Pie loves parties and sugary sweets combined. I haven't felt that warm fuzzy feeling in a while, but you did it fine sir.
778185 I reject your reality and substitute sugar.
Dammit. My top twothreefour ships all involve Dash. I will need some sort of clone-ray (or changelings ) to have a fic with my all my favorite pairings.
The chapter started out pretty awesome, but the whole thing with Rainbows parents kinda came out of nowhere and was resolved in no time at all. Kinda ruined the effect of it all really, heh. Shoddy planning on Twilights side overall of course, a single missed train has such disastrous effects? She should probably have triple checked her own check-list again xD.
Still a nice story though, I wonder how long you'll keep it going.
rad five chapters so far, love it! curious if you know how many chapters there will be in total? I'm hoping for at least two more, so in total i got five more to read, but that is entirely up to you. I love you style of writing and rainbow dashes way of bursting out with emotion, but only when her special somepony is around. Love those moments soooo much.
this has been so fun and I'm so glad it isn't over yet. the different locations and different plot points and way of capturing several character's way-of-doing-things. this has been epic. I suck at explaining, but in short:
I feel like i am reading a professionally done book that could be sold in stores (well if it wasn't on MLP and had its spelling fixed, but its fan-fiction, so none of that matter)
THAT....WAS.....BEAUTIFUL!!! Amazing story, even if I'm not really one for romance novels, I still have thoroughly enjoyed it. I think I felt a tear in my eye at the end of this chapter.
NOW TIME TO PARTY!!!!!!!
You know what Pinkie? Fine let's party.
ALRIGHT!!! LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!! ALRIGHT!!! LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!!!
this is my favorite fanfic, second to my use-to-be fav: pinkieshy. because a shipping fic does not have to be straight to the point and can give you good setting and events other then the shipping itself. a good amount o history. i feel like im readign a book, not a fanfic. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH
A very well put together chapter. To be honest... I think the deal with Dash's parents is milking it a bit, but you didn't quite overstep the bounds of believability, so I'll respect it. I suppose Dash needs to have some weak point other than her fear of disappointing Twilight. If you work with that and Dash's characterization a bit I can see it working... but honestly, I'm probably being too whiny. I just don't feel that it's added much at this point.
Dem vows! Dashie, you are the best.
The hilarity at the beginning was great. Makeup shenanigans with Dashie are always fun! I have no idea what the hell Pinkie was going for, but whatev'. Silly Twi', "everything's going to be just fine.", I think you'd've learned by now that no plan can survive a dual assault by Pinkie Pie's randomness, Rainbow Dash's badflankery, and Rarity's obsessive compulsory.
Really fun and adorable (who you callin' adorable!? (oh Dashie, you so cute)) chapter, TAW! You've still got the light-hearteded feel that drew people into this story going strong, even while furthering the plot in complete seriousness. All your little jokes and insightful descriptions make this story a real treat to read, especially Dash's rather er..... unique, personality.
Looking forward to more! Keep on rockin', TAW!
Hey, I kept my promise. I gave you a nice review. Do you remember when I told you I could be mean or nice? Nice it is. :3 ^^^^^^ Look, everyone. I can do the TAW grey text thing too. This proves I am hardcore TAW fan, because she does it too and now other people do it on her stories and blogs, I are so cool. Hurr hurr :3 I'm a terrible person, but I wanted to make fun of this fad. Please don't hate me.
This is one of the best shipping fics I've ever read, even if it is also a clopfic (I'm not saying I don't enjoy them, but a clopfic alone is boring, and mixing a shipfic with a clopfic can prove to be rather challenging, and you still did it perfectly, portraying Rainbow's and Twilight's relationship in a convincing way to how a normal relationship usually goes).
The story as a whole manages to give me a warm feeling in my heart as it goes.
Personally, I feel like the fic is far from done yet, as you still have a wide array of options to work with in it. Keep up the good work.
I read the entire thing thus far today and I must say it is a masterpiece , definitely one of my fav fics. Only one mild criticism which I'm sure has already been pointed out to you, you occasionally slip up and use anybody instead of anypony, but I can overlook look this because you are such a great author
PS I noticed that it is still marked incomplete, so am eagerly awaiting an update, hopefully with a happy ending. Keep writing you brilliant person
This has proven to be exactly what I expect from you, TAW. Even if it isn't just a one-shot clopfic, or just something random that you thought up, not once have I been unimpressed. This display of writing prowess just furthers my knowledge that you are, truly, the best author on this site.
A twidash, well-written with intermittent clop, and a lengthy plotline that was complex enough to make for a good read, but not too complex to be difficult to understand.
I feel, with utmost certainty, that you deserve every bit of recognition that you've ever recieved, and more. TAW, you never have, and never will, cease to amaze me.
Yeah, I know this comment is about 120% cliches, but it's all true. I hope you never give up writing, because the day that you stop is the day that I give up my writing as well.
I had just checked the main page moments ago for an update! Good thing there's that featured box up thar. =D
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Yay.
As always amazing TAW.
I love you.
>"Yeah! You said this one wouldn't cake on my coat, and uh, I kinda stopped listening at 'cake',"
>between the baked bandit and the damsel in a dress.
>dumbfounded both that Pinkie would leave such a crucial step to Pinkie Pie.
>"No, silly, I have a tray!"
Seriously. This is both amazingly funny and sappy and sweet. This whole chapter.
You're making it hard on this PinkieDasher here.
this story is just beautiful
ohhhwhhhhwhhwhw your sir are fucking awesome, lovely chapter
What in the world...
Edit: ... is going on?
This is nice.
Now they just have to seal the deal dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Rainbow's vows were very... Dashing...
I love this story and my only request is that it never ends.
Love it! Keep up the great writing!
I so hope for you, that this story isn't over! Because, if it were, I would have to track you down and force you to write more chapters!
Loved it
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Just one question. Why couldn't Celestia just use her magic and repair the dress?
YEAH! Drinks all around! And good luck to those two.
Wow that was an awesome chapter I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Was that a Carrot Top reference I caught in there? I know Golden Harvest is technically her canon name.
Anyways, good job! I have absolutely loved this story from the beginning and I can't wait for more~
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*Cough* Twilight's List being one of the greatest published pieces of literature of all time *Cough*
Again, I loved this chapter, I noticed again that the story was good enough that clop wasn't needed, I think Applejack SHOULD have just let Twilight help in the first place, for Rarity's sake... That poor, innocent dress...
But most importantly this chapter, despite all the tragedy and drama, made me happy and my heart feel warm and fuzzy. It was lovely.
The tragic part though is how explaining to other people how amazing FiM fanfiction can be is...About as straightforward as styling Rainbow's mane.
The end? I loved this more than Pinky Pie loves parties and sugary sweets combined. I haven't felt that warm fuzzy feeling in a while, but you did it fine sir.
the start was a little confusing but damn it, I loved it
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That's because PinkieDash is heathenish, silly!
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It was getting a little long by the end, so no honeymoon right now
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I reject your reality and substitute sugar.
Dammit. My top
twothreefour ships all involve Dash. I will need some sort of clone-ray (or changelings ) to have a fic with my all my favorite pairings.778630
Or a very, very tired and sticky Dash. I like that one.
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I may or may not have notes on that story.
It's the reason she naps all the time.
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This is a story I wish to read.
No wonder her mane and tail are so messy (and pretty)
The chapter started out pretty awesome, but the whole thing with Rainbows parents kinda came out of nowhere and was resolved in no time at all. Kinda ruined the effect of it all really, heh. Shoddy planning on Twilights side overall of course, a single missed train has such disastrous effects? She should probably have triple checked her own check-list again xD.
Still a nice story though, I wonder how long you'll keep it going.
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So much awesome!
Argh i can't hold all of my d'awwws
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Thats exactly what I thought too!
Yay! Update!
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She's a sun-mover, not a seamstress.
I wanna see what Twilight looked like
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Because tradition, I think. Same as with winter-wrapup having a no-magic rule.
786534 That makes sense I guess. Still a sick wedding.
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!!!!!
D'awwww. Also Rainbow's vow is the best.
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This is now my headcanon.
rad five chapters so far, love it! curious if you know how many chapters there will be in total? I'm hoping for at least two more, so in total i got five more to read, but that is entirely up to you. I love you style of writing and rainbow dashes way of bursting out with emotion, but only when her special somepony is around. Love those moments soooo much.
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A little something like this, perhaps?
"Congratulations Rainbow Dash, you're the new black!"
this has been so fun and I'm so glad it isn't over yet. the different locations and different plot points and way of capturing several character's way-of-doing-things. this has been epic. I suck at explaining, but in short:
I feel like i am reading a professionally done book that could be sold in stores (well if it wasn't on MLP and had its spelling fixed, but its fan-fiction, so none of that matter)
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Um sure. Something like that.
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I prefer to think of her as the new "air"
THAT....WAS.....BEAUTIFUL!!! Amazing story, even if I'm not really one for romance novels, I still have thoroughly enjoyed it. I think I felt a tear in my eye at the end of this chapter.
NOW TIME TO PARTY!!!!!!!
You know what Pinkie? Fine let's party.
ALRIGHT!!! LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!
ALRIGHT!!! LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!!!
Whoo!! Bring the music you two!!
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this is my favorite fanfic, second to my use-to-be fav: pinkieshy. because a shipping fic does not have to be straight to the point and can give you good setting and events other then the shipping itself. a good amount o history. i feel like im readign a book, not a fanfic. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH
A very well put together chapter. To be honest... I think the deal with Dash's parents is milking it a bit, but you didn't quite overstep the bounds of believability, so I'll respect it. I suppose Dash needs to have some weak point other than her fear of disappointing Twilight. If you work with that and Dash's characterization a bit I can see it working... but honestly, I'm probably being too whiny. I just don't feel that it's added much at this point.
Dem vows! Dashie, you are the best.
The hilarity at the beginning was great. Makeup shenanigans with Dashie are always fun! I have no idea what the hell Pinkie was going for, but whatev'. Silly Twi', "everything's going to be just fine.", I think you'd've learned by now that no plan can survive a dual assault by Pinkie Pie's randomness, Rainbow Dash's badflankery, and Rarity's obsessive compulsory.
Really fun and adorable (who you callin' adorable!? (oh Dashie, you so cute)) chapter, TAW! You've still got the light-hearteded feel that drew people into this story going strong, even while furthering the plot in complete seriousness. All your little jokes and insightful descriptions make this story a real treat to read, especially Dash's rather er..... unique, personality.
Looking forward to more! Keep on rockin', TAW!
Hey, I kept my promise. I gave you a nice review. Do you remember when I told you I could be mean or nice? Nice it is. :3
^^^^^^ Look, everyone. I can do the TAW grey text thing too. This proves I am hardcore TAW fan, because she does it too and now other people do it on her stories and blogs, I are so cool. Hurr hurr :3
I'm a terrible person, but I wanted to make fun of this fad. Please don't hate me.
This is one of the best shipping fics I've ever read, even if it is also a clopfic (I'm not saying I don't enjoy them, but a clopfic alone is boring, and mixing a shipfic with a clopfic can prove to be rather challenging, and you still did it perfectly, portraying Rainbow's and Twilight's relationship in a convincing way to how a normal relationship usually goes).
The story as a whole manages to give me a warm feeling in my heart as it goes.
Personally, I feel like the fic is far from done yet, as you still have a wide array of options to work with in it. Keep up the good work.
I read the entire thing thus far today and I must say it is a masterpiece , definitely one of my fav fics. Only one mild criticism which I'm sure has already been pointed out to you, you occasionally slip up and use anybody instead of anypony, but I can overlook look this because you are such a great author
PS I noticed that it is still marked incomplete, so am eagerly awaiting an update, hopefully with a happy ending. Keep writing you brilliant person
Somepony needs to draw the scene with Dash and Twilight at the alter. IT MUST BE DONE!
Also, an incredible job as always. Thank you, TAW.
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That's intentional. "Anypony" in dialogue, anybody outside of it.
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Yes, yes it should. Ta.
This has proven to be exactly what I expect from you, TAW. Even if it isn't just a one-shot clopfic, or just something random that you thought up, not once have I been unimpressed. This display of writing prowess just furthers my knowledge that you are, truly, the best author on this site.
A twidash, well-written with intermittent clop, and a lengthy plotline that was complex enough to make for a good read, but not too complex to be difficult to understand.
I feel, with utmost certainty, that you deserve every bit of recognition that you've ever recieved, and more. TAW, you never have, and never will, cease to amaze me.
Yeah, I know this comment is about 120% cliches, but it's all true. I hope you never give up writing, because the day that you stop is the day that I give up my writing as well.