Dear TAW I don't know what to think about this chapter as I have not yet read it, but I already know that I will not be disappointed, whatever happens in it. Your faithful reader, Orion
I'm sorry, I can't express or elaborate more, these last two chapters are absolutely destroying me. Please, for the sake of my health and wellbeing, give me something, anything, happy in the next chapter.
1401023>>1400917 Hah, yeah, sorry guys. This chapter was meant to be "Everything sucks at the start, but then gets better by the end."
Unfortunately, it came to a grand total of 24,000 words. I uh, I split it into two chapters. This is the "Everything is shit" chapter. Next chapter is hopefully painfully adorable and plot relevant.
Painfully adorable is the preferable alternative to "Painfully Painful".
I must be a masochist, I love this chapter, story, but I've reached that point of sadness where you're just too heartbroken, shocked and drained to even cry. I HAVE NO TEARS BUT I MUST CRY.
Edit: Okay, read it now and not as sad as the comments let me to believe... I think reading a multitude of 'Sad' fics here on Fimfictions have hardened me... and that actually annoys me...
RD figured out she needs to get back to TS, so all's great. Feel kinda bad for the tree RD is about to destroy (she can break solid rock by crashing into it with no damage, that tree is doomed).
Okay, what the HELL did I MISS?! I've been reading this story since the beginning, and last I remember, we were on the honeymoon! So WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!
omgosh such good writing, when dash and cloud shine were about to do stuff, i got really frustrated and angry and i stopped reading for a minute, and thought! "she's the element of fing harmony!" so yeah this is awesome keep it up! and yes i agree with everyone else really sad man lol
1402481 well their honeymoon was chapter 9 and chapter 10 was the summary of the first 10 chapters so maybe you missed chapter 11, it may have to do with the fact that email notification were off until like today, so maybe u checked your email and saw that TAW had released a chapter today and you assumed it was the most recent chapter because you didnt get a notification about the prior chapter
FINALLY! I love this story! This is one of the primary stories that inspired me to start writing, like, at all. This chapter was just as good as the rest, I loved it! Hm, I hope Dash is alright...
1402653 I don't get Email updates. I assumed the story was cancelled. Then it updated today, and I was so !!!!!!!!, then I started reading, and then the comment, and you know the rest.
I've got five chapters in my favorites tab that updated recently. FIve chapters to read. Then it turns into six. I see this has updated. Fuck the rest, I'm reading this. One of the few stories I'll prioritize. Fantastic work as always. I look forward to the next chapter immensely .
1407103 You're greatly welcome. Think you could read/review my fic someday? Please note it's the first thing I've ever written... ever, not even for school, or anything, it is literally the first thing I ever wrote that was/is that long.
Dear TAW
I don't know what to think about this chapter as I have not yet read it, but I already know that I will not be disappointed, whatever happens in it.
Your faithful reader,
Orion
Dear Taw:
I have not read this whole thing.
KoS
TAW always delivers.
Reading now
new chapter...omygoshomygoshomygoshomygoshomygoshomygoshomygosh
This needs to update more, faster, sooner.
Be still my aching heart.
I'm sorry, I can't express or elaborate more, these last two chapters are absolutely destroying me. Please, for the sake of my health and wellbeing, give me something, anything, happy in the next chapter.
It... It hurts...
1401023>>1400917
Hah, yeah, sorry guys. This chapter was meant to be "Everything sucks at the start, but then gets better by the end."
Unfortunately, it came to a grand total of 24,000 words. I uh, I split it into two chapters. This is the "Everything is shit" chapter. Next chapter is hopefully painfully adorable and plot relevant.
I'm guessing one or two more emotional chapters next where there is Royal Intervention and another magical accident but that's just me...
I am very excited and a bit scared for what comes next...
1401052
This chapter, Ow. I speed read it because I didn't want to feel all the ow's right now, I'll have to re-read it later
1401052
Painfully adorable is the preferable alternative to "Painfully Painful".
I must be a masochist, I love this chapter, story, but I've reached that point of sadness where you're just too heartbroken, shocked and drained to even cry.
I HAVE NO TEARS BUT I MUST CRY.
Obligatory sci-fi reference.
REGARDLESS...
... I need the happy soon...
1401075
It's legit already written, so for this one chapter I can finally promise that it will not be another month's wait.
uhmm.
1401087
So submitting it tomorrow? I need a breather after this chapter. Legit, I feel like I've just run a marathon...
And I'm Australian. You're either fit or dead, here.
1401052 A 24k words chapter would be nice! And more of them. But 11k is also okay :D
New chapter!
YES!
Edit:
Okay, read it now and not as sad as the comments let me to believe... I think reading a multitude of 'Sad' fics here on Fimfictions have hardened me... and that actually annoys me...
good one...and so long, too
also
"screwing her eyes shit"
1401087
This is a wonderful tale but...
I REQUIRE MOAR
1401052
everything sucks?
ses u
RD figured out she needs to get back to TS, so all's great.
Feel kinda bad for the tree RD is about to destroy (she can break solid rock by crashing into it with no damage, that tree is doomed).
Ohmygosh, Rainbow head-crashed a tree?
Come on, everypony knows she pierced through it, and she's alive and well, just the tree didn't survive
...right?
oh shit...
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It still needs editing and proofreading, but the major bulk is done.
Okay, what the HELL did I MISS?!
I've been reading this story since the beginning, and last I remember, we were on the honeymoon!
So WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!
Ugh, still hate the story line about Dash getting kicked out of the Wonderbolts, but at least she got her head on straight finally.
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I Pinkie-promise I didn't do it to her for nothing, there are plans waiting to unfold for her.
This chapter, I like it.
omgosh such good writing, when dash and cloud shine were about to do stuff, i got really frustrated and angry and i stopped reading for a minute, and thought! "she's the element of fing harmony!" so yeah this is awesome keep it up! and yes i agree with everyone else really sad man lol
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i think you might have skipped some chapters lol
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I don't think so. Maybe. REREAD TIME!
Thanks a lot.
1402481
well their honeymoon was chapter 9 and chapter 10 was the summary of the first 10 chapters so maybe you missed chapter 11, it may have to do with the fact that email notification were off until like today, so maybe u checked your email and saw that TAW had released a chapter today and you assumed it was the most recent chapter because you didnt get a notification about the prior chapter
Did you ever mention how many parts will there be?
and by the way, this is one of the best fic out there ^^
Damnit TAW, as I said earlier today. YOU ARE THE FREAKING MASTER OF CLIFFHANGERS!
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FINALLY! I love this story! This is one of the primary stories that inspired me to start writing, like, at all. This chapter was just as good as the rest, I loved it! Hm, I hope Dash is alright...
Dash finally got her head on straight. Now to figure out what's up with the magic.
Good chapter for the plot, but also not a good chapter for the plot, if you get what I mean.
1402653
I don't get Email updates. I assumed the story was cancelled.
Then it updated today, and I was so !!!!!!!!, then I started reading, and then the comment, and you know the rest.
1400917 gotta agree that this chapter was such a downer. I didn't ever think I would read a clop where I bawl my eyes out
I've got five chapters in my favorites tab that updated recently. FIve chapters to read. Then it turns into six. I see this has updated. Fuck the rest, I'm reading this. One of the few stories I'll prioritize. Fantastic work as always. I look forward to the next chapter immensely .
Thank you so much for continuing this.
I hope them good feels are on the way, I can't handle many more of these bads
Damnit TAW, buck your cliffhangers
So. Much. HEARTBREAK!!!!! i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/308/031/880.gif
Happy nao plz? I think I've had enough of the sadness.
Please let it be a bouncy Dashie not a crashing Dashie
amazing chapter as always
You WILL post the second half twenty-four hours after the first, which is now!
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I didn't, and I don't want to. My estimations are always hilarious.
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Yay! That's ultra awesome to hear, thank you <3
1407103 You're greatly welcome. Think you could read/review my fic someday? Please note it's the first thing I've ever written... ever, not even for school, or anything, it is literally the first thing I ever wrote that was/is that long.
Just when I was wondering when the next update would be! Excelent work as always TAW! This is just so damn perfect. I still have nothing to complain about so yeah! I cant wait for moar as always!
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Stop making me sad goddammit!
The next chapter will be happy... Right?