Knew the honeymoon sex was gonna be next, but it was done way better than I could ever think possible. Simply flawless, this whole chapter was perfect.
Very sweet and I liked Twilight taking charge. Now we just need to see Twilight use one of her crystals for some mid-air tomfoolery. We'll be golden then.
Great chapter! I'm glad to find a story that goes beyond Dash and Twilight coming out. Most of the other stories usually end there and it sucks! Keep it going!
Finally, a chapter (and even a fic!) where Twilight takes charge over Rainbow Dash. For some reason I've always preferred the idea of Rainbow being a bit more submissive in bed rather than being completely dominant all the time. Not completely submissive, but at least not her usual brash and outgoing personality.
And as usual, AWESOME! I have to admit, I've never really gotten into the idea of mare/mare magic use for pregnancy, but with this story, I definitely approve (probably just because it's a Twidash. I'm such a biased bastard ). That said, I think they're going to make great parents.
Just made an account JUST to comment on this. Loved it! I don't feel right reading the clop parts, but I just can't help myself. Oh well. Question: Is there going to be anymore? This one looks like a good ending (Although I don't want that) Question 2: If it's not the end and you plan to keep going? I know it can't go on forever sadly. But I just thought I'd ask.
891326 Ponies and Parties is more of a strategy game, inspired by things like Civilisation and Risk. Each player starts out with a set number of ponies, and they can command one of them to do something each turn for the purpose of being the first to throw an awesome party. I originally had an explanation of it in there, but then I realised nobody would care. 891198 Y- yep :( 891364 He's been asking about it for weeks :p 891557 Hey! Spoilers >:| (Not quite, but... well, you'll see.) 893362 Indeed, she *does* have a vulnerable side, and really it's about time that came out in the bedroo- ocean here, rather than just making her mope about shit. Poor Dash. 893502 This is not the end, though it does mark the start of the last major story arc, so the end isn't *that* far off. Still a way to go, though.
Spectacular!! Yet another gorgeous chapter!! Everything goes together so perfectly, and I especially like how Dash was more submissive in this chapter. I can't do anything but love this! I now eagerly await what is yet to come from this fantastic story (other than the ending that is, I dread that)!
Most times. It's used correctly once or twice, though. "Practise" is the verb - to practise sport - while "practice" is the noun - to attend music practice. Just need that little bit of a touch-up and I think you're good.
Well, perfect, actually. You're damned good as you are. Continue to satiate my desires the way you do, TAW; I have a serious need for TwiDash.
And oh Celestia I've said the word practise/practice so many times in my head it's lost all meaning
...For future reference, I'm going to assume you were being sarcastic. As for being a bitch to replace, a quick CTRL+F revealed seven occurrences of "practise" and none of "practice" in the chapter, and they're all right near one another; not such a big job if you think about it.
And also for future reference, I don't think anyone really cares that you made that mistake; your stories are too amazing. it cud al b riten leik dis n i dont thing no1 wud car.
895619 I wasn't being sarcastic, but I was thinking more globally than just this chapter. Then again, there aren't that many uses in the other chapters either apparently, so not that huge. 895659 Are you implying Dash needs assistance to please her mare? Because I think she'd be pretty mad at you for that implication.
898079 Are you calling Dash a child? Because she'll hit you for that. I know what you mean, she probably wouldn't. I wouldn't go around insinuating anypony could do Twi better than her, though.
897689 If you ever want to do some editing of the earlier chapters... don't do that I almost tried to kill myself after giving ch1 a quick passover earlier. I mean, goddamn, I understand why people rewrite the start of long stories now.
And it was goooooooooooooood. I'm guessing now the final story ark is the complication that you introduced in this chapter, that being the idea of a foal. 'Tis my guess we'll get a few chapters of ponies being ponies, awesome sticky times, Dash pulling epic stunts and maybe some notice from the wonderbolts, then we'll see further headway with Twilights research, followed by a conclusion that wraps up Dash having been a wonderbolt, Twilights research having done untold good for all pony kind and them finally settling down with a foal while Twilight continues her studies forever more.
891326 I think in some way, it sounded like some kind of mix of wizard chess and dungeons and dragons, judging from the name and some if the things Twilight said.
OHMAGGG TO CUTEEE..... and the sex is good too
finally a story that Dash is the "mother", all others treat her like a stallion in the skin of a mare
totally worth the wait
I love reading this story!
Naice! Keep it up TAW...
Knew the honeymoon sex was gonna be next, but it was done way better than I could ever think possible. Simply flawless, this whole chapter was perfect.
That sad realisation when Twilight will never suspend you in water currents and drive you crazy
DAWWWWWWWWW
Oh My God, where they playing wizard chess?
Was wondering when a new chapter was gonna come out, loved it. My favorite TwiDash fic
That moment when you realize knighty is tracking your fic.
knew this was going to be cute but this was even beter that anyy of us could have asked for
MOAR MOAR
So good in so many ways. Best TwiDash ever.
Very sweet and I liked Twilight taking charge. Now we just need to see Twilight use one of her crystals for some mid-air tomfoolery. We'll be golden then.
The levels of daaaaw are painful.
891198 Can't win 'em all
my fav fanfic ever i do believe, you never fail to impress.
holy shit; Twilight rutting Dash silly... this is madness.... no.... this is absolutely positively 100 percent fucking awesome
MUST........ER.....RESIST....TO D'AWW!! NONONO!!!! D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
great story.
Loving the story. Only critique is how you spell "practice".
Great chapter! I'm glad to find a story that goes beyond Dash and Twilight coming out. Most of the other stories usually end there and it sucks! Keep it going!
Finally, a chapter (and even a fic!) where Twilight takes charge over Rainbow Dash. For some reason I've always preferred the idea of Rainbow being a bit more submissive in bed rather than being completely dominant all the time. Not completely submissive, but at least not her usual brash and outgoing personality.
And as usual, AWESOME! I have to admit, I've never really gotten into the idea of mare/mare magic use for pregnancy, but with this story, I definitely approve (probably just because it's a Twidash. I'm such a biased bastard ). That said, I think they're going to make great parents.
Just made an account JUST to comment on this. Loved it! I don't feel right reading the clop parts, but I just can't help myself. Oh well. Question: Is there going to be anymore? This one looks like a good ending (Although I don't want that) Question 2: If it's not the end and you plan to keep going? I know it can't go on forever sadly. But I just thought I'd ask.
891326
Ponies and Parties is more of a strategy game, inspired by things like Civilisation and Risk. Each player starts out with a set number of ponies, and they can command one of them to do something each turn for the purpose of being the first to throw an awesome party. I originally had an explanation of it in there, but then I realised nobody would care.
891198
Y- yep :(
891364
He's been asking about it for weeks :p
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Hey! Spoilers >:|
(Not quite, but... well, you'll see.)
893362
Indeed, she *does* have a vulnerable side, and really it's about time that came out in the bedroo- ocean here, rather than just making her mope about shit. Poor Dash.
893502
This is not the end, though it does mark the start of the last major story arc, so the end isn't *that* far off. Still a way to go, though.
893934 Great way for her more vulnerable side to come out at least. Sounded like a hella lot of fun.
>Twilight talking about foals with her partner
I thought I wouldn't feel jelly anymore over TwiDash
Nope
Fuck you ;_;
Spectacular!! Yet another gorgeous chapter!! Everything goes together so perfectly, and I especially like how Dash was more submissive in this chapter. I can't do anything but love this! I now eagerly await what is yet to come from this fantastic story (other than the ending that is, I dread that)!
894138
A long way off, though, they're both far too busy!
You know what feels weird? Feels like I read this before. Maybe I was watching you while you were typing or something.
This story never ceases to be excellent, keep it up.
Um, I really liked this chapter.
891198
Alas, cruel fate!
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Haha dude, where'd you get that gif? And what game was that from?
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Ah, so it's kind of like Pony Agricola, then.
...I may have to work on a mockup of this.
895143
I'd totally love to play it, my parties would be so awesome
893286
Most times. It's used correctly once or twice, though. "Practise" is the verb - to practise sport - while "practice" is the noun - to attend music practice. Just need that little bit of a touch-up and I think you're good.
Well, perfect, actually. You're damned good as you are. Continue to satiate my desires the way you do, TAW; I have a serious need for TwiDash.
And oh Celestia I've said the word practise/practice so many times in my head it's lost all meaning
Best. Story. Ever. Loved every second of it.
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...oh man they are two different words!
I had no idea!
...man, fixing all those is gonna be a bit of a bitch.
895596
...For future reference, I'm going to assume you were being sarcastic. As for being a bitch to replace, a quick CTRL+F revealed seven occurrences of "practise" and none of "practice" in the chapter, and they're all right near one another; not such a big job if you think about it.
And also for future reference, I don't think anyone really cares that you made that mistake; your stories are too amazing. it cud al b riten leik dis n i dont thing no1 wud car.
I was thinking. Maybe you could... have Twilight magically give Dash fully functional, one time use, male genitalia.
895619
I wasn't being sarcastic, but I was thinking more globally than just this chapter. Then again, there aren't that many uses in the other chapters either apparently, so not that huge.
895659
Are you implying Dash needs assistance to please her mare? Because I think she'd be pretty mad at you for that implication.
895151
If you let me come (DAMNIT KNIGHTY, NOT THAT KIND) I'll mix drinks. Pony drinks. The best type.
My favourite alternative for the Pinkie Pie is 1:1 ratio of strawberry milkshake to cake vodka... But hey, ain't no party like a Pinkie Pie Party.
static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Pony+Drinks.+Which+would+you+drink_34d8f6_3192078.jpg
Which only leaves the question:
Would playing Pony Agricola be more fun before or AFTER getting smashed on ponies?
goddamn. I need to find a way to donate what time i have to you if it'll get me more of this faster.
amazing. Definitely one of the best TwilightXRainbow Dash stories out there if not thee best
895722 Children.
Absolutely loved this. And i have the feeling that there is more to come...
Also i cant place my hoof on it but i have the feeling that you are epic
898079
Are you calling Dash a child? Because she'll hit you for that. I know what you mean, she probably wouldn't. I wouldn't go around insinuating anypony could do Twi better than her, though.
897689
If you ever want to do some editing of the earlier chapters...
don't do that I almost tried to kill myself after giving ch1 a quick passover earlier. I mean, goddamn, I understand why people rewrite the start of long stories now.
EVERYTHING STOPS NOW, IT'S STICKY PONI TIEM.
And it was goooooooooooooood.
I'm guessing now the final story ark is the complication that you introduced in this chapter, that being the idea of a foal.
'Tis my guess we'll get a few chapters of ponies being ponies, awesome sticky times, Dash pulling epic stunts and maybe some notice from the wonderbolts, then we'll see further headway with Twilights research, followed by a conclusion that wraps up Dash having been a wonderbolt, Twilights research having done untold good for all pony kind and them finally settling down with a foal while Twilight continues her studies forever more.
But, ya'know, just a hunch.
900469
Some of those are closeish, but...
895120
Website to the gif? Or link? It amuses me how they might as well be on ice.
891326 I think in some way, it sounded like some kind of mix of wizard chess and dungeons and dragons, judging from the name and some if the things Twilight said.