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well, still dont like it, only part 1, that means Winona gets her way.
better beginning still dont like it.

3330705 Something tells me I'm gonna need them.

3330715 I understand, I'm honestly expecting a lot of people to dislike this, but I honestly wanted to do this because the original played the idea of rape for laughs, which doesn't sit right with me and I want to take a serious approach.

Hmm. I wasn't a big fan of the original, so I honestly think I'll pass on this one. I appreciate your efforts, though. It's admirable.

Love,
Pip

3330774 I understand. This kind of thing is not for everyone.

Great work so far hope to see more

3333357Updates will take some time because I want this to be taken seriously.

I hope this one ends on a happier note but seeing the dark tag well it kills my hope. But I will favorite this time because Spikes feelings are taken into consideration.

3334093 Sorry to ruin your hopes, but I can tell you this will take the situation seriously. To me, rape jokes are not funny.

3334595 Well Im already in it might as well finish. :fluttershysad:

3330705
:rainbowdetermined2: Commander.
:pinkiecrazy: Yesss.
:rainbowdetermined2: Is that fanfic again. Give the dog a bone has a remake.
:pinkiecrazy: Argh! We can't allow such transgression, bomb it!
:rainbowdetermined2: We can't sir, they have anti-hate shields enable.
:pinkiecrazy: Call the fleet then, I declare... Exterminatus.
:rainbowhuh: Sir you can't be serious, maybe is not as bad as the last one.
:pinkiecrazy: Do not question me! Now, call the fleet.
:rainbowderp: Yes sir, right away, sir.

*after reading the story*
:pinkiegasp: Wait! Cancel the order, it was a good remake.
:rainbowlaugh: Too late sir, there is nothing left.
:pinkiecrazy: Oh snap.

[Joke aside]
:pinkiecrazy: I love this remake, because I really hated the behavior of Twilight and Applejack in the last story.
:pinkiehappy: Can't wait for more, please keep up the good work my good sir.

Yours truly... Necromancerx69

Ps... Please don't use Angel assholeness to capture/rape spike (if possible). Thank you :pinkiehappy:

Its about time there's a fanfic with Winona, apparently these type of fics are an extreme rarity :applejackunsure:
Twilight and Spike with the sock was a good touch, it was full of d'awww :twilightsheepish:
I hope you continue this fanfic, i would love to see what happens between Spike and Winona :twilightblush: :moustache:
Damn you FIMFiction for not having a Winona emoticon. Take this, good sir
dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/53160306/11269cc6d9e10d8105b7058f6025c56e.png

3335804 You killed it! Damn you! Damn you to hell!

(Joke aside)

This one may take quite sometime to finish. This is a pretty heavy subject to me and I wanna do it right.

3339659 Word of warning, this will not have a happy ending. Don't expect any good feelings from this.

3352731 ...
What a way to crush a man's dreams... :raritycry:

I didn't care for the original...
Now this.. This I will be watching...

3361806 Well,thank you, but I should warn you. This won't end well.

You know what.....:applejackunsure:
This might not be better than the original story but at least you showed us you made it your own.......:twilightsmile: Nicely done!

3365047 Honestly, my main reason for doing this was to take a more serious approach to the subject.

3366512 And you did congrats......

Thank you!!!

3510808 This one is going to take a while. I'm still brainstorming how exactly I should handle it.

So far I am liking this better than the original. The changes are not so noticeable yet but I can see this is gonna be good.

3607615>>3510808/3334595
I liked the original, but this is Soooooooo much better already,
And as for you......................
You have earned my favorite and like...............................
Please make it interesting and "engaging", NOT LIKE THAT, but you know what I mean
:pinkiesmile::pinkiesad2:
:moustache:

3512572 Is it wrong that I want it to end with Spike and Winona happy together?:ajsleepy:

3614534 I understand not wanting to see a bad ending. This kind of thing is not for everyone.

Nice begging to a awesome remake of give the dog a bone :coolphoto:

Excellent start to this remake of an excellent fic. I look forward to more.

more! for the love of Celestia's giant flank more!

I know you plan to have the rape in there. But is it okay, if after all is done, to have a alternate chapter or story where spike embraces being a dog and stays with whinnona or something? Please?:fluttershysad:

I don't want to sound rude but when will there be an update for this great fic?
please,mr.author?:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

4213181 I'm sorry to make you wait so long but if you read my recent blog you'll see why.

I would like to say I concur with GAMEZ IS GOOD. To clarify that means If you, as the author, wouldn't mind could we have an alternate chapter end where Spike willingly mates with Winona, and perhaps we could hear about the pups born of such a union, this is of course if you don't mind doing that! I honestly like the base premise of the story Winona is in heat and wants Spike to be her mate, though the rape part makes me slightly uncomfortable.

Just finish up this first then worry about the new stories.

I kind of like this better then the original :pinkiesmile:

Good start i'm interested even if it's morbid interest. I also have an idea that Spike could try. In the last bit you stated that other dogfood would make Spike obese in no time. Maybe dedicate a chapter to Spike being so scared of Winona and what she has planned for him that he finds and gorges himself on the fatty dogfood in hopes it will deter her and one of two outcomes happen. One: It doesn't deter Winona or two: Twilight finds out before he can gorge himself and stops him.

⸘What is wrong with Spike‽ ¡He should want to have sex!

This story needs a copyeditor.

11147361 Degenerate horn dog.

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