Trouble
The next morning, Fluttershy came up to Rainbows crib and shook Rainbow gently. "Rainbow sweetie, it's time to wake up." she said in a sweet motherly tone.
Rainbow stirred a little bit but then went back to snoozing, Fluttershy picked her up over her shoulder and started pouncing Rainbow she would let her sleep but she had already slept half the day away and she had something special for her and Lightning, Rainbow started to open her eyes and yawned then she looked at her mother.
"Mommy, what is it, why did you wake me up?" Rainbow asked.
Fluttershy smiled. "You've been out most of the day and I have a surprise for you and Lightning." she replied going over to the other crib and reaching down into it she started rubbing Lightning's back.
Lightning opened her eyes and looked up at Fluttershy and smiled. "Good morning, mommy." she said happily it felt weird calling her that but it also felt good, she never had a mother before.
Fluttershy picked Lightning up in a free hoof then kissed both foals on the head, "Good morning you two, I have a surprise for the both of you." she said.
"What!?" both of them asked excitedly.
Fluttershy giggled. "Harry the bear invited us for a tea party, I know you two aren't into that stuff but if you want you could go play with the little critters that'll be there." she said.
Both of them thought of it for a moment then nodded in unison. "Otay Mommy, that's sounds cool." Lightning said.
****
Later, Fluttershy went to where Harry the bear invited her to with Rainbow and Lightning in there foal carrier, the spot was a nice place under a willow tree on top of a hill by a lake a perfect spot for tea.
Fluttershy trotted up to the tree and saw Harry under it sitting on a picnic blanket with a tea set and Fluttershy's other animal friends: Angel bunny, Tank, a few birds, squirrels, bear cubs and Mr. honey. Fluttershy came up to her animal friends and sat down on the blanket, she unstrapped the foals out of the carrier and let them down.
When Lightning saw Mr.honey she felt like peeing herself she could still remember the horrible beating she got from that honey badger then she felt a hoof on her back and she looked behind her to see Fluttershy with a comforting smile, "Don't worry he wont hurt you." she comforted then nodded to Mr.honey.
Mr. honey stood up from his spot and came over to Lightning, she squeed when he started to rub against her but then calmed down and smiled his fur felt so soft and she started to pet him.
Fluttershy smiled. "Okay you girls can go play now if you want to, Oh and stay close so I know where you are okay." she said, Both foals nodded then Angel came up to them and motioned for them to follow him.
Lightning let Honey go and followed behind Rainbow and Angel down the hill with some of the birds and squirrels and bear cubs to a safe spot by the lake.
Angel then turned around to meet his ward. "Okay kids, I will be your babysitter so I have some rules for you to follow." he said and everypony groaned he waved a paw. "Don't worry they're not all bad, all I want from you is to stay safe and have some fun!" he retorted and then they all cheered.
"Yes! So what do we do fiwst?" Lightning asked.
Angel put a paw to his chin thinking. "Hmm, we could play tag, would you like that?" he asked, Rainbow and Lightning shook there head yes.
"Yeah that sounds fun," Lightning said as she looked at Rainbow and boobed her nose, "youw it!" then flew away.
Rainbow was stunned at first but then squinted her eyes."Hey that's cheating!" she said then took of after her.
They played together with the animals for what felt like hours until the two foals felt tired and decided to take rest by the side of the lake, they were laying on there backs breathing heavily Lightning looked down at the water in the lake looking at her reflection.
"Hey Wainbow." Lightning called over to the other foal.
"Yeah?" Rainbow said
"Do you and Fwuttewshy weally forgive me?" she asked.
Rainbow sat up and looked at Lightning. "Yeah why wouldn't we? It wasn't weally your fauwt for what you did, well it kinda was but you just wanted to be loved by your daddy and he used that against you to do bad things so don't sweat it." Rainbow replied.
Lightning still felt bad. "But what I did was howwible, I couwd have huwt you." she said sadly then felt a small hoof on her and she looked at Rainbow.
"It's okay alwight, me and Fwuttewshy forgave you. Besides I think you've been punished enough." Rainbow said then looked away and rubbed the back of her head. "and maybe it'll be fun you know....to have a sister."
Lightning was surprised by that last comment. "Weally, you want me.....as a sister?" she asked.
Rainbow nodded. "Suwe why not? We'we stuck together anyway." she said then was suddenly was pulled into a hug by Lightning.
"Thank you, you and Mommy are so nice." she said hugging Rainbow, Rainbow wasn't into hugs, but she let it slide this once she returned the hug.
"D'aww isn't that cute." Fluttershy said who had left the picnic to get the foals, both Rainbow and Lightning let go of each other and looked up at their mommy and blushed she giggled. "Okay you two, it's time to go." she said as she picked them up and put them in the carrier and left for home.
****
When she got home she saw somepony standing on her porch, she got closer to the pony. "Umm hello, who are you...If you don't mind telling." Fluttershy asked.
The pony turned to Fluttershy he was a stallion with a dark green coat and a dark yellow mane. "Yes, I'm looking for my daughter Lightning Dust." the stallion said.
Lightning gasped she knew that voice she looked as best she could from the carrier at the stallion. "Daddy!!" she yelled.
The stallion looked from the mare to the foal in the carrier and raised a brow. "Dusty?" he said and came up to his daughter to get a closer look. "What happened to you?!" he asked in a bit of a mad tone.
Lightning said nothing and looked down ashamed.
"Umm maybe I can explain," Fluttershy said getting his attention. "if you could follow me inside."
****
Fluttershy explained to Storm Dust as he said his name was the story of what happened to Lightning, he was not amused when she finished her story, Storm sighed.
"Lightning, I didn't send you here to poison a pony's mind." he said to the foal by Fluttershy's side, Lightning curled up closer to Fluttershy. "You look at me when I'm talking to you young lady!" he yelled
"HEY!!" Fluttershy yelled starting to get angry from the stallions rude tone. "You know what you had in mind for her to do to Rainbow wasn't very nice either." she retorted.
Storm scuffed. "She's nopony important."
"Nopony important." Fluttershy snapped. "NOPONY IMPORTANT, THAT'S MY BABY!!" she yelled in a voice that could have matched Luna's canterlot voice.
Storm stood back started to get scared of the mare's anger, he gulped. "Well uuh sorry, well since this conversation is now over I guess I'll be going now with Lightning of course." he said walking over to Lightning about to take her until Fluttershy stood in front of him.
"NO! I'll tell you what your going to do, you're going to get out of my house and my town or else I'm going to rip your head and stick it so far up your plot THAT YOUR HEAD WILL REGROW BACK ON YOUR SHOULDERS!!" Fluttershy yelled her voice turned into something between her normal voice and something demonic and evil.
Storm stood further back from the mare. "Y-you cant stop me." he said.
"Rainbow, Lightning," Fluttershy said with her normal sweet motherly voice the foals looked at her. "I want you to close your eyes and ears, okay?" the two obeyed and did what they were told and Fluttershy looked back at the stallion.
Storm Dust got farther back afraid of what the mare may do.
"Angel!" Fluttershy called and Angel came into the room and handed Fluttershy a battle axe. "Okay you have five seconds to leave before I hack your head off." she warned.
He didn't hesitate to run out the door.
Fluttershy looked back at Angel. "Angel, I want you to get Mr. honey and his friends to get him and bring me back his skull." she said, Angel took back the battle axe and ran out the door.
Fluttershy calmed down and looked at her two little foals who still had there hooves in their ears and eyes shut she went to them and picked them up, Lightning opened her eyes and looked at Fluttershy. "Is he gone?" she asked.
Fluttershy smiled. "Yes he's gone," she said then hugged them both tight. "and we're going to be together forever."
Lightning returned her hug and so did Rainbow, she was with ponies who cared about her, ponies who would love her no matter what.
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But let's leave Ponyville. If not, at least leave Fluttershy alone. She has enough foals as it is.
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Don't worry its she wont have anymore foals its just going to be little adventures of Rainbow and Lightning and the friends they'll make, although I should warn you I do plan on regressing some pony's here and there.
3198057 Temporary or permantely? In either case I say go for it.
I say go for it, I read all the stories and enjoyed all of them. I think it might be cute to throw the CMC in the mix. Maybe Scootaloo becomes part of Fluttershy's and Rainbow's new pegasus family too. No one really knows who her parents are, and some think she may be an orphan. just a suggestion.
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, didn't see what you said before my bad. 
Still I think it would be cute to have the CMC regressed.
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"A B!?" ~NintendoCapriSun
That means B
Go ahead and continue. I'm kinda interested in seeing how the rest of the herd starts to see Rainbow as she grows up again. Or how Rainbow's parents react (unless she's orphan like Scoots). or CUTIE MARK CRUSADER FOAL SITTERS YAY!!!!. Taking this guys idea 3198144 and having Scoots become Rainbow's Big Sis would be cool as well. Hope at least one of these ideas get you moving.
On another note, I have to say that your writing ability has improved over all three stories. Though Flutters seemed EXTREMELY out of character at the end of this one. She isn't really going to send a horde of angry animals at Dusty's father right?
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Well thank you I'm trying really hard to write better
as for if I'm going to have Fluttershy adopt scootaloo because she is an orphan (witch she is not in this.) sorry but my mind says no and when the mind has spoken it is done
although I will make Rainbow and Scootaloo be like sisters in the story
as for the last question if anypony thinks they can take Fluttershy's baby's remember...grand galloping galla. 
3199202
I agree with Super-Stallion
I sure am glad I'm not in Storm Dust's horseshoes. I still would like to see a plot twist of the CMC becoming baby foals if you decide to do that, it's all up to you.
Just thought of another scenario. Sunset Shimmer returns and becomes a foal and possibly Twilight's daughter and Trixie's sister. What do you think?
Freedom Fighters got the right idea. Onward with the Sunset Shimmer fic.
Either B or Freedomfighter062's idea only those two, the other ideas are invalid (jk)
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I second this idea
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Read Foal Adventures.
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lol! I literally just found it XD Thanks!
He unleashed Flutterrage. The only way to stop it from destroying the universe is to use my planet destroying satillite cannon.
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Fire cannon!
3733157 The entire planet was destroyed with the force of a thousand suns.
3729364 NOPONY TAKES MY DASHIE AND DUSTY!NOPONY!!!!!!!
3748547 She-she's still alive? Omnitrix, self destruct in three days.
Ummmm.... Fluttershy, asking her animals to chop off storms head, and bringing her his skull.... I know when someone threatens her friends or her animals she goes bonkers.... But just for that one paragraph it should be rated DARK.... Note to kids... Willmost likely give you nightmares..... If you love ponyville that much
Go for a series!
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Already am it's called Foal Adventures and its right where the other stories I made are.
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and have a scean where fluttershy is polishing storms skull. With his cutie mark. And a polish made from his blood.
3748547 ok madame I wasn't trying to I m gonna go now so sorry don't kill eek0.0
Rainbow and Lightning shook there head yes
i think you meant nod
a fine finish. i really loved how rainbow and dust bonded together.
i hated Storm Dust for who he talked to and about Dusty though
i will agree, fluttershy had every right to threaten him with the axe... but that whole bring me his skull thing? That's too dark for fluttershy, even if she's defending her babies. she just told angel to commit murder in her name.
going to Celestia and and explaining the situation, yes, that would've been a good idea. Celestia would definitely make sure Storm didn't do anything in relation to Dusty after that. did not like that you kinda just made fluttershy a murder at the end here. what would dusty think if she ever found out. the sweet image of flutteshy would be shattered in her eyes.
3202557 check out my fic, The Foal and the Student. it may be just what you're looking for
3942657 I was just about to do that, thanks.
If I had any say in this, you should make another fic when both Rainbow and Lightning gets to their original age.
Oh godess Storm Dust you never mess with a mother and her offspring NEVER!
unless you wish to die
4254562 As the old saying goes "Hell Hath No Fury Like a Mother Protecting Her Children"
You have to continue. Please continue!!!
Feisty!!! Rawr.
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What is wrong with you? I read this and I might have taken this the wrong way but that sounded perverted?
4674914 I meant Feisty like she's cute when she's angry. Sorry if you took it the wrong way.
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Okay your forgiven I just needed to know no trouble.
b i'd love it!!!!
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Odds are it was accident and I don't plan to fix it cause I would only end up making it worse.
b yes
...okay... So now we got a murder by Flutters here... it seems completely unreasonable; even if the culprits were her animal friends that she sicced on the poor stallion. What did he do to deserve this anyways, all he did was try to calmly take his kid back after scolding her and partially insult Rainbow Dash. Doesn't sound like a cause for a beheading if you ask me, if anything why not go with what Wrathion did in World of Warcraft when he and the Ravenholdt captured a rogue player and the Red Dragon Mostrasz trying to find the uncorrupted Black Dragon Egg.
That's really assertive!
Angel I'm not Fluttershy remove the skull from my desk now