Hi my name is... well, you don't need to know my name just yet, but you can call me Disaster. Disaster the draconequus. I used to be human before I met that old geezer Discord who gave me the deal of a lifetime and sent me to Equestria as a draconequus like him.
Now I'm in Equestria, going wherever I wish making trouble and friends alike.
More tags will be added as we go along.
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1) Learn proper grammar and practise it.
2) Put a [Human] tag on this.
GRAMMAR.
WORK ON IT.
>mfw draconicus
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>stops reading
>thumbs down
At least you spelled the title right.
Sorry, but... no.
JUST no!
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is it the grammer problem or the idea in general
and also I will get an editor for this.
3260747 It's less the grammar as most the Story itself.I cant put my hoof on it but... the story dont "catch" me.
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alright i'll try harder at it then still kinda sad that it got so many thumbs down
The description... just.. oh god.
The idea is great an all, but the writing quality makes it hard for me to immerse myself in the story.
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Hello everyone! I know you all commented on his bad grammar and/or disliked the story but I edited the first chapter and description so it's easier to read. Could you guys re-read the first chapter and give it a chance?
I should finish editing chapter two before tomorrow. Sorry if there is still some grammar mistakes, I'm not perfect. Thanks for understanding!
3271226 Good to see you are working on it!
I will revisit this story in a week or so and check up on the progress, although if I may give a suggestion. Decide upon a character personality for the human and run with it. The reason I mention this is because it felt like a different person (mentally) before and after his arrival in Equestria.
I can understand it changing as the story progresses, but it should be done a little at a time as he gets new experiences.
a little quick...but not bad, I like the concept, so continue.
why he doesn't have some power ?
Nice chaptef
Nice chapter lol
i haven't read this yet, but, from the description I'm having trouble seeing a foalfic connection here. a human sent to equestria as a Draconequus like discord? unless he's a baby Draconequus i don't see the connection.
I realize since my foalfic involves the human Sunset Shimmer going into equestria that sounds like i;m being a hypocrite, but i honestly don't see the connection as to how this will be a foalfic. does Disater turn several ponies into foals?
I'll try to read this, but I've so many projects right now, and so many other fics I've promised to read, I'm not sure when I'll get to it, but I'll try.
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No this is something else from my usual regression stories I was trying something new...sadly most people didn't like it.
MOAR