for some reason....i didnt find this chapter to be that good. seemed somewhat rushed or something.

It's hard to give advice to improve this when I can barely follow the story. The background stuff that drives this whole thing just confuses me :) I'm sort of enjoying it but I'm scratching my head more often than not.

The feels!!! :( loved the story but alot of typos threw off the pacing a little, still hope to see more!

OKAY! This Was Great. And The Applebloom Arc is complete. Now, I think we can all agree that he needs his next point to be relaxing. maybe a day at the beach with the 6. how does that sound?

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I hope you have something under your sleeves because to be honest this is kinda getting repetitive. Dude just cant't catch a break. I miss it when he was still investigating a way out of the time loop.

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I have something planned that's for sure.

3651074 Oh Sweet Baby Luna

In the first half I was all like, "burn them all with your flamethrower"
And then I was like, "Damnit, you don't have a flamethrower!"
But then I was like "BITE HER FACE OFF"
And I have no idea how but you have satiated my lust for violence with your, "love and tolerance"
Ugh! You drive me to rational thinking!

Anyways, you did good. A few misspellings but that's to be expected in a chapter this long.
Other than that I'm faily stisfied with the way you wrapped all this up.
Keep it up, and remember: Toasted toast don't toast toast.

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You know what they say!
All toasters, toast toast!

Great to see this chapter finished, and even more mayhem.

☸A bit late to comment, but this is ヅwhy life needs ☾haos.

Wow, I just finished reading up to the current chapter--bravo on the mind scramble! Unfortunately I wasn't really able to understand all the events but it was amusing nonetheless. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next chapter! Cheers bro