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Doctor Magnum


The good Doctor M will see you now.....

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They called him The Writer. He comes from a system known as Dien. He is the ruler and protector of this world and has loved his people and served as their king for hundreds of years. But in the blink of an eye it is all wiped out. An old foe wields a weapon of ultimate destruction and burns all of Dien in mere moments. Not even the Writer can stop him. In a desperate, last ditch effort, the Writers friends create a portal through space and hurl him through it against his will praying that he will find a safe place to hide and that his survival will bring back the power of Dien. Lost, broken, and filled with a sadness and rage unlike anything, the fallen king crashes on a world called Equestria. The denizens try their best to heal the broken man but there is more to this king than meets the eye. With the help of the Elements of Harmony and many others, The Writer sets out to find a way to curb his wrath and bring his home back from Destruction.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 39 )

A rather original concept... An intriguing opening... You, friend, have earned yourself a favorite and a follow.

Yay! This is gonna be awesome.
also first! :rainbowwild:

Like the idea (ALOT). All of the things have been done to this story by me.:rainbowwild:

Ok then. I have read some bad fics in my time, some really bad fics... But this...

This is awesome. I await more. :twilightsmile:

Bloody celly and lulu always jumping to conclusions and blasting the alien I mean seriously its a 10:1 ratio for the times they do that...

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*huge sigh of relief*
Ok.....whew dont do that. Thank you for the feedback. Next chapter will be up soon i promise.

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I know right? Dont worry he gets back at them.

1948309
Haha good... They deserve some retribution from randomly blasting aliens... :pinkiecrazy:

Was listening to Paradise Lost by Hollewood Undead while reading the fic. The song fits in with some of the scenes.

Loved every word, you sir have talent and have earned a follow and a fave.

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Whoa! You are correct sir. I think this song would go very well to future scenes just saying. I think Ill make it the official theme of this story. Thanks for the feedback and favorite and follow dude!

*Screams with glee*

Thanks for the shoutout.

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You are welcome sir. You deserved it. :moustache:

the big text near the end kinda threw me off a little, but overall another excellent update. I can guarantee this is going to end up being one of my new favorite stories.

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Yea I probably shouldnt have made it that big i was just trying to capture the emotion there but I think Ill tone it down if that will make it better but Im really glad you like this so much thank you

:rainbowdetermined2: I'm honestly finding this story and its lore incredibly interesting! I'm eagerly expecting to see how The Writer explains his world and customs to the ponies, as I am intrigued myself as how he ruled, being the equivalent of a god and all :pinkiehappy: great story! :yay:

I must say that I really like the idea you came up with, can see some good potential for a great story.

I did notice a few things, however that you might want to check out:

The wording in some of the sentences is rather awkward, you seem to repeat some words quite a few times during those.
I didn't see any glaring grammar issues except some abscence of apostrophes.

Other than that I really like it and want to see where this goes!

So...
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Thats actually going to be in the next chapter so you can look forward to that. :twilightsmile:

1995809
I have passed the test of the great boss cat. I am relieved.
Also yes I have noticed this and I am working on trying to fix that. I apologize and I will try to fix it for other chapters.

whoa, epic. and the space-floating Demiurge seeking for The Writer. whoa. feels like Tia and Lulu would be rather weak in your story.

Ok, I'm now hooked and want more, this is pretty damn awesome stuff.

this story needs more harbinger lol

Potential, this story has it !

The settings you made until now is really good, and I'm looking forward !

Thanks M! You got me a birthday chapter :pinkiehappy:
Just what I was hoping for.

That muuuuuusic......
Made it all so much more epic. :rainbowdetermined2:

Another great chapter. keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

Clap clap clap. Excellent world building! I particularly enjoyed the second planet best :moustache:

If you split your sentences up a bit to make them a little shorter, the story flows much better. I find that the semi-colon is a writers best friend when large amounts of description are needed. It provides a nice break in the info, and allows the reader to better digest and experience what you're trying to show them.

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YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK?!




I think you are quite right.
I have in fact gone through the first part of Chapter 4 and done some surgery to it trying to help make it better. Let me know if I did a better job this time and I'll do the same to the other chapters.
Sorry for the long response and thanks for the review and advice mate. =)

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You have my utmost word that an update will come very very soon my dear reader. Have faith for I am returning.

2533597 'Very soon'...
10 weeks later.
Anyways, great story! It managed to catch my interest and keep it, I must ask, is The Writer practically the right hand of god? (Or is he god, or a demi god? Godlike being?)
Anyways, update soon. Best regards - An active reader.

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That actually gets explained later. And yea I explain that in my recent blog post why I am so late

Three years since the last update. I think you missed something as well, on Sincostan you mentioned there being two other worlds, then Wilghast was the last one. Seems like you lost a planet at some point.

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