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Xrizzle


"A rather small incredible paragraph that changes your thoughts on the world" What he said.

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This...is actually pretty fucking good buddy. Well done! :pinkiegasp:

I see you chose to include Mr Rake...Good man.

Make the thoughts into italics, otherwise it'd confuse anyone not familiar with your writing style. Apart from that though...Pretty solid work.

Keep it up and I'll give it a fav. You've earned the thumb up though :pinkiehappy:

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Are the thoughts not in italic?
oops, gimme a second I thought I had that covered.

I like it; keep it up and I wont have to hit you with my fist full of courage.

Currently making the paragraphs smaller so we don't have to go to specsavers just to read it :derpytongue2:

Zamairiac brought to me here.

Hmm, grimdark Equestria with a time twist thrown in...this should be good, but for now *adds to 'read later' list*
I'll enjoy this immensely.
~Sylpheed and Eli

almost seems like the movie groundhog day. how fast will the updates to this story be??

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Working on chapter 2 now, just taking my time with it :twilightsheepish:

Well, let's see where this goes :twilightsmile:

Aru

Fav, to keep this story on my radar. For now.... I think this guy is really sick in the head. This whole "resetting" is probably only is his head. Damn, people on Earth have sometimes similarr ilness. But in most cases they live same day for years not knowing this, only their famillies are aware of this fact.

Well, I just watched Looper recently, and just from reading the story summary I instantly think of the end of that movie. Would you end your loop if given the chance?
Ok, now time to read the story

Woahohoho, that was awesome. I need more of this, like naow.
Uh, dude you spelled now wrong.
I know.
...Okay then, ya wierdo.
~Sylpheed and Eli

"Friggin cool" Reaction to description Reaction to chapter, fix your sentence structure and grammar, it's grinding my gears, other than that, I really liked this, he's so crazy, reminds me of myself and how I sometimes lose my mind in anger and despair.

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I hope i can impress you in the future then :raritywink:

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Thanks :pinkiehappy:
There is more coming shortly.

You wonder where you could go with this story. How about yesterday where it is just like the day you were writing this. Just watch your clock for midnight.

Im not that confused. i watched a movie(ithink) about something alot like this..or it was a video game..hmmm...so its kinda easy to follow along.
love the story keep it up. I NEED MOAR NOAW

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I'd prepare myself for chapter 2 then. :derpyderp2:

this is the most unique Hie story that i've read so far, cant wait to see how the next chapter will be like:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks so much, I hope I can continue to impress you :raritywink:

3159553 just realized what movie it was~ BUTTERFLY EFFECT. the first one. so twi remembers him in the next chap and is friends with him aj doesnt cos he spend little to no time with her. celey knows something tho..or suspects something. i think i know how it gets fixed~

3161826 half...:raritydespair: lol. im thinkin either he has to get away from them as lovers or choose one. or spend time with all six and become friends.

In a world where a human has been thrusted into a situation he rather not have. he must make choices,friends,and lovers while surviving the time loop and hell have to do it:
One reset at a time.

^--weird movie thingy :twilightsheepish:

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Coming soon. To a cinema near you! :raritystarry:

tia knows something and wtf happened at the end of this chapter.:rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

This guy...This guy has got issues... I think him and Discord would make such great friends.

I'm lovin' the story by the way. One fave and thumb up coming up. :pinkiehappy:

“What in tarnation!” I turned and saw Applejack looking awfully terrified.

“Applejack?”

“How do you know my name?” Applejack backed away suddenly and looked like she saw a ghost.

“What?” I was more confused than ever right now and I wondered why Applejack was acting differently.

Holy shit, I TOTALLY didn't expect that! This is getting fucking good!

I can't wait for more. :heart:

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I'm glad you like it :twilightsheepish:
I hope i can keep that love up with Chapter 3 :twilightoops:

Little does anyone know. But this is base on a true story just without ponies. You see, the author must go through this over and over until they get it right, only they also must get this story written in a proper manner at the end of the day or they reset and must try again.

I think i know where your going with this. :twilightsmile: And i like it.

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:moustache: I don't remember writing this story. who are you guys? :rainbowlaugh:

3179612 and so, a week passes and the author still has not remembered the story-line,who we,the readers, are, nor why he has a craving for words. but on top of all this, the author has not remembered his password to fimfiction.

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Nearly done, and writing now actually :twilightsheepish:
It was originally complete, but when I reread I made a huge mistake that would of shifted the plot in a direction that wouldn't make any sense so I pretty much had to rewrite the beginning which of course messed the rest of the story so yeah :facehoof: Fail on my part lol

3203281 The Author Lives :pinkiegasp: i hope it gets done today. that would make it a great day. i need my filling of daily words.

Not 10000 words or more O_O!!!!

NOPE NOT READING, NOPE, NOPE, NOPE!!!!

...K I'm reading :ajsleepy:

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Writers block was hitting me hard :pinkiesad2:
But I got through it

Aru

The hell. Fimfiction just now have informed me about updates. Two chapters to read. Btw in last chapter you have somewhere written that AJ i element of kidness, and If I'm not wrong somewhere you have messed up AJ with Twilight, names I mean... Or maybe I'm too darn sleepy and I read wrong something about losing Twi from this timeline. But in this chapter AJ was not knowing him as well.... so....
Argh I'm too mind fucked now and probably tired to think even.

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I'll take a look, I am known to make mistakes so if you see anymore just say, but as you said it could be because you are mind fucked :twilightoops: Which means my plan has worked.
But I will check anyway :P

Edit: Ahh I know what you mean, everyone has forgotten him is all, but things work out then get worse again :(

best story since Zamairiacs nothing is set in stone awesome job dude.:pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

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He'll get jealous from that comment and thank you so much :scootangel:

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