Have you ever been trapped in a fixed point in time, where the same day just repeats itself over and over. Well I have and I am. My name Samuel and this is my story.
okay...this is getting reaaaaalllyyy drawn out and boring. it got really good when twi stayed behind and he had the compass then it went kaput, he shoulda went looking for answers and not getting stuck with the bullshit of the crazy ponies this time.i liked it better back before the applebloom arc..Honestly, this may be the last stop on this ride for me.
3483255 I love this story, I truely do. and the applebloom arc had my attention when it started. then it lost me when it became a bit of filler. then it caught my attention again when it was picking up and he had the trial and twi giving the compass. then it crushed my hopes that we would get a huge mystery chapter and instead it became a bit of filler. like the part with fluttershy running away. that was a good addition..but with applejack and the dreams..kinda eh in my opinion.
3483287 i hope so. i remember when the author asked how many chapters an arc like this should be. i think it was debated to be around 2-4 depending on how good it would be,if its just conversations, or if it was actually important stuff.
Spoiler: Was The Butler That Killed Applebloom. Always The Butler, No Exceptions.
Writing next chapter, and already making things better, i'd rather get the filler out the way with early than have tons of it near the end where it will just annoy people when it builds up to the final moments if you get what i'm saying. I'll make up for it next chappy (I hope) when Sam goes... wait, i'm not meant to talk about that.
Also the whole forgetting everything only lasts half a chapter, i needed it to happen for something big to come down next time. If he didn't... well it wouldn't make sense from what I have in store next.
3483326 Ill Stay On Board This Crazy Train If You Can Promise Itll Hold My Attention And Make Me Wanting More. Also When Is The AppleBloom Arc Gunna Be Finished? I Like The Idea, But Knowing That AppleBloom Was Murdered In That Timeline Makes Me Feel..Unclean..
okay...this is getting reaaaaalllyyy drawn out and boring. it got really good when twi stayed behind and he had the compass then it went kaput, he shoulda went looking for answers and not getting stuck with the bullshit of the crazy ponies this time.i liked it better back before the applebloom arc..Honestly, this may be the last stop on this ride for me.
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Meh I liked it personally
3483255 I love this story, I truely do. and the applebloom arc had my attention when it started. then it lost me when it became a bit of filler. then it caught my attention again when it was picking up and he had the trial and twi giving the compass. then it crushed my hopes that we would get a huge mystery chapter and instead it became a bit of filler. like the part with fluttershy running away. that was a good addition..but with applejack and the dreams..kinda eh in my opinion.
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They'll all add up eventually (hopefully XD)
3483287 i hope so. i remember when the author asked how many chapters an arc like this should be. i think it was debated to be around 2-4 depending on how good it would be,if its just conversations, or if it was actually important stuff.
Spoiler: Was The Butler That Killed Applebloom.
Always The Butler, No Exceptions.
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Writing next chapter, and already making things better, i'd rather get the filler out the way with early than have tons of it near the end where it will just annoy people when it builds up to the final moments if you get what i'm saying. I'll make up for it next chappy (I hope) when Sam goes... wait, i'm not meant to talk about that.
Also the whole forgetting everything only lasts half a chapter, i needed it to happen for something big to come down next time. If he didn't... well it wouldn't make sense from what I have in store next.
Insanity awaits!
3483326 Ill Stay On Board This Crazy Train If You Can Promise Itll Hold My Attention And Make Me Wanting More. Also When Is The AppleBloom Arc Gunna Be Finished? I Like The Idea, But Knowing That AppleBloom Was Murdered In That Timeline Makes Me Feel..Unclean..
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Next chapter is the finale of the arc.
No one really knows if she was really murdered
I think I said to much.
I'm out!
I'l let you try figure it out as i did leave a few clues
3483360 lol m knight shyamalan wants his twists back. i swear if shes still alive and is now princess of the timberwolves..
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Okay, rewritting now, princess of wolfs sounds good.
Jokes lol
Nah, nothing to do with wolfs, or anything like that. just er... stuff
Okay Sam, who do you fuckin' love?
Twilight or Applejack??
Make up your damn mind!!!
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Both, let's bring out the threesome!
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Naturally! ¦3