Have you ever been trapped in a fixed point in time, where the same day just repeats itself over and over. Well I have and I am. My name Samuel and this is my story.
3278355 well i mean is that the applebloom arc coulda gone sooo much better, im good with them being that long, just not this one. its still good but i was seeing it going a so much different way. I do love the twi part tho where the kiss brings over the memories from the other timeline, i see that happening more in special cases. I can see the ending of the story as the same from the Butterfly Effect movie where he loves all of them but to get on track for a normal line he A: chooses to walk away from them and lives his life on earth or equestria remembering everything that happened. B: walking away from them and choosing a lover off the beaten path(EX: Zecora,Lyra,Colgate, etc.) Honestly if this happens i wouldnt be surprised, but i believe youll pull it off in a different way. I await more. Also please dont make him love rarity. shes a good pony but i can see the story starting good then going pop near the end. i would also love to see one where there are ponies, a few, that are not affected by the time change. They know its happening but dont question it and when he finds one that can help, in the next loop they dont exist or have their memory changed to where they dont know what he's talking about.
you said don't make him love Rarity, but what is funny was that i originally planned for the 3rd chapter to be him married to Rarity, but i thought nah, if he falls in love with all of them it's going to be a little dull. So i scrapped it. well unless people want to see that then i guess i could bring that back for a funny special what if chapter, but meh.
I think that celestia put sam under a spell almost like virtual reality or the time loop to test him and see how he would react in desperate and stressful situations to see how humans can act and how dangerous they really are. Similar to the wanderings of a non brony series.
I keep face desking over these typos, you really have to stop that. WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN THIS STORY?! Nothing is reseting and it just keeps getting worse for him.
A whole new level of being insane....and it gets bigger everytime...and worser and worser....and hope is just thought of nothing and will never shine your way.
i think the AB arc should be around 2-3 chaps. cos this one is a little ehhn.
There are a few typos throughout the chapter. Might want to go back through it. Wish I could help more, but ponies interrupted homework time
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Yeah it's like 2 AM right here in the UK, i'll prob go through it tomorrow and fix any typos I made. :P
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I was thinking about making it rather short. it wouldn't really be Trapped from tomorrow then. more like trapped for a few days
3278355 well i mean is that the applebloom arc coulda gone sooo much better, im good with them being that long, just not this one. its still good but i was seeing it going a so much different way. I do love the twi part tho where the kiss brings over the memories from the other timeline, i see that happening more in special cases. I can see the ending of the story as the same from the Butterfly Effect movie where he loves all of them but to get on track for a normal line he A: chooses to walk away from them and lives his life on earth or equestria remembering everything that happened. B: walking away from them and choosing a lover off the beaten path(EX: Zecora,Lyra,Colgate, etc.) Honestly if this happens i wouldnt be surprised, but i believe youll pull it off in a different way. I await more. Also please dont make him love rarity. shes a good pony but i can see the story starting good then going pop near the end. i would also love to see one where there are ponies, a few, that are not affected by the time change. They know its happening but dont question it and when he finds one that can help, in the next loop they dont exist or have their memory changed to where they dont know what he's talking about.
TL;DR : BLARG
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you said don't make him love Rarity, but what is funny was that i originally planned for the 3rd chapter to be him married to Rarity, but i thought nah, if he falls in love with all of them it's going to be a little dull. So i scrapped it. well unless people want to see that then i guess i could bring that back for a funny special what if chapter, but meh.
3278526 ...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
best chapter yet.
I think that celestia put sam under a spell almost like virtual reality or the time loop to test him and see how he would react in desperate and stressful situations to see how humans can act and how dangerous they really are. Similar to the wanderings of a non brony series.
Bah! All those typos! Why are you doing this to me?!
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Because I can
(Currently editing them out)
I keep face desking over these typos, you really have to stop that. WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN THIS STORY?! Nothing is reseting and it just keeps getting worse for him.
Wh-What is this madness?!
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All I can say is you have been closer to anyone else on guessing what is happening.
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Because we all need a little insanity in our lives :S
Also sorry about all the typos, sorting them out now ;)
A whole new level of being insane....and it gets bigger everytime...and worser and worser....and hope is just thought of nothing and will never shine your way.