This...is actually pretty fucking good buddy. Well done!

I see you chose to include Mr Rake...Good man.

Make the thoughts into italics, otherwise it'd confuse anyone not familiar with your writing style. Apart from that though...Pretty solid work.

Keep it up and I'll give it a fav. You've earned the thumb up though

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Are the thoughts not in italic?
oops, gimme a second I thought I had that covered.

Skype?

From Zamariac with love!

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I like it; keep it up and I wont have to hit you with my fist full of courage.

Currently making the paragraphs smaller so we don't have to go to specsavers just to read it

Zamairiac brought to me here.

Hmm, grimdark Equestria with a time twist thrown in...this should be good, but for now *adds to 'read later' list*
I'll enjoy this immensely.
~Sylpheed and Eli

almost seems like the movie groundhog day. how fast will the updates to this story be??

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Working on chapter 2 now, just taking my time with it

Well, let's see where this goes

Fav, to keep this story on my radar. For now.... I think this guy is really sick in the head. This whole "resetting" is probably only is his head. Damn, people on Earth have sometimes similarr ilness. But in most cases they live same day for years not knowing this, only their famillies are aware of this fact.

Well, I just watched Looper recently, and just from reading the story summary I instantly think of the end of that movie. Would you end your loop if given the chance?
Ok, now time to read the story

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Spoilers sweetie.

Woahohoho, that was awesome. I need more of this, like naow.
Uh, dude you spelled now wrong.
I know.
...Okay then, ya wierdo.
~Sylpheed and Eli

"Friggin cool" Reaction to description Reaction to chapter, fix your sentence structure and grammar, it's grinding my gears, other than that, I really liked this, he's so crazy, reminds me of myself and how I sometimes lose my mind in anger and despair.

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I hope i can impress you in the future then

That was amazing.

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Thanks
There is more coming shortly.

You wonder where you could go with this story. How about yesterday where it is just like the day you were writing this. Just watch your clock for midnight.

Im not that confused. i watched a movie(ithink) about something alot like this..or it was a video game..hmmm...so its kinda easy to follow along.
love the story keep it up. I NEED MOAR NOAW

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I'd prepare myself for chapter 2 then.

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This guy...This guy has got issues... I think him and Discord would make such great friends.

I'm lovin' the story by the way. One fave and thumb up coming up.