• Member Since 4th Jul, 2013
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chrisharte97


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Looks promising so far :twilightsmile:, but could use some tweaks with spelling. Also, Ermac should be saying "we" and "our" instead of "I" and "my"

3030708 I forgot about that, thanks for the info. :raritywink:

3030802 No Problem :twilightsmile: Always happy to help :)

Really liking this now :twilightsmile: love how you incorporated Ermac's moves from MK into this, but again, could use some grammar and spelling fixes. :twilightsmile:

Oooooo, I thought for certain I was gonna see a Fatality there :O Nice Work :twilightsmile:

Sounds promising.. Keep going! Ahm liking it already :pinkiehappy:

Though, it's a bit tad fast in pace.

It sounded interesting, but I don't like the way Ermac is portrayed.

Yeah I don't know how to make the video thing work, but I'm trying. :ajbemused:

There we are, I think I have it down.

Oh I know that isn't the last we will see of the Slendermane :P

3152090 Oh yeah that final blow only weakened him, but he will be back in the third part, but I'm sure you read my heads up too. :twilightsmile:

Okay, uh... Um... Not suggesting anything here but, uh, isn't somebody already doing this with scorpion? Yeah, I think they started a few days before you... Imagine that...:ajbemused:

3201146 Yeah um I did not read his story so can't pretend to know that I've seen the story, but no, this is way more different than his story for it has Slendermane in this.

Hey guys I found a good cover for this story, and I'm sorry that I haven't made any chapters yet. :fluttershyouch: I just haven't found the time yet.

7875848 sorry I didn't mean to type anything it's because I'm on my iPad so I must of typed it by accident.

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