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Thy Obsessive Freak


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Cup Donut wishes to make a world where those with special gifts and those without can live in harmony. She forms a team that is named the X-Stallions. But her dream doesn't go into fruition as it's members are in conflict of how to run the team. This is the first chapter of the X-Stallions.

The idea to write X-Stallions was inspired by TheInvincibleIronBrony, Sonic Mario3 and of course Avenging-Hobbit

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Well fancy that!

Didn't see this coming to be honest.

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Yeah... neither did I? I was just bored with the cold, stuck in my bed and decided to submit this for some reason to amuse myself. Aren't I crazy in the head?

3072757 Yeah....

I would proofread, but I'm obviously tied up with stuff...I do suggest you get a proofreader for future chapters.

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What? You mean there's gramma mistakes, but I like proofread, twice :fluttercry:

3072780 True, but as I said, it's always good to have someone with an objective view point.

Just as a backup really.

Comment posted by Sagacity deleted Aug 20th, 2013
Comment posted by Thy Obsessive Freak deleted Aug 20th, 2013
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