Six social outcast ponies, each rejected from Equistria for one reason or another, come across six Elements of chaos, a counterpart of the Elements of harmony made by Discord himself. Each is then fitted with these and are to come to Discord's rescue. Out six manes become entangled in this story and its up to them to stop these six counterparts, before they free Discord and together take over all of Equstria.
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"She had the cutie mark of balloons that pooped."
You may want to fix that little typo. It's kinda silly.
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Sorry, I had difficulty thinking up the cutie marks. Really just want pass that bit
I loved it! And how could I not it has my favorite character in it. But besides that the ending did seem a little cut short. Although I did enjoy what happened to the chaos wielders.
Oh this is good. Fast paced, some people may not like that, but this is still good!
"Balloons that pooped." Not sure if clever play on words, or typo. Either way I laugh. Continue reading for me.
Creative story throughout so far.
"I'm going to give you a bath!" MFW Rarity said that--->cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/20858521.jpg
Also I imagine Glomun talking kinda Beavis or Butthead.
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Darn I was wondering what Jhpher was meaning. Though it was a criticism of cutie marks (Hurts self)
But thanks for pointing that out.
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In your words goods sir, "Glad to know I could help."
"We spent eight hours, so we have six-teen left." pardon the fact of me asking but, didn't they have thirty-six hours?
“No it doesn’t, they can exhaust their heads all they want, but if we arrive exhausted we’re more at a disadvantage if they have rested at all. We can’t just throw ourselves at them, considering we’re Equistria’s only hope.” Equestria is spelt with an e after u.
Keep it up bro.
Also if you need someone of Grammar Nazi proportions to help, let me know. I'll gladly help you. I make it a policy of mine to help others, especially those who help me.
Discord's lines were so amazing and in character! Too bad he didn't get to last very long.
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Admitingly the thing was rushed at the end. I just didn't think out the whole climax between Discord and the Six manes, my biggest fun was my OCs, sorry but what drew me to make this was them six. But glad you enjoyed Discord, it's great to hear what you thought of him.
But yes, I always admire a gramma nazi. It's what prompts me to improve my editing skills which I'm only now developing (For 8-10yrs I struggled figuring out how to edit and all that). I appreciate the read and comment though, very much, thanks for the stick around.
“I am to!” screamed Frownie
Wrong to. It's supposed to be too.
Other than, that, I didn't see anything. Keep it up!
I would want to be Dawnshade and he is also the most like me (because I HATE rules) of all the ones who have the Elements Of Chaos.