Granny Smith is growing ill, Big Mac has had a foal with Fluttershy, only to find his foal is disabled. Applejack is in shambles, remembering her parents death. Applebloom is no better, her family half gone, how can she survive this?
Chapters (2)
- Member Since 1st Jul, 2013
- offline last seen Oct 25th, 2018
PinkLemonLimeSprinkles
Hello! You might know me from Youtube or Fanfiction.net. I am a 19 year old woman, who loves parties, studying, and apples. My main OCs are Lemon-Lime, Celery Stalks, and Pink Sprinkles.
PinkLemonLimeSprinkles
Joined 1st Jul, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- PinkLemonLimeSprinkles · 1k words · 15 3 · 768 views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.059 seconds
Total duration
977 users online
1,404,944 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Hey! Love the story. I'm actually crying alittle. but you made a mistake it says"Babs had gotten her cutie mark a few days before Babs, which made her proud." do you mean Apple Bloom had gotten her cutie mark a few days before Babs, which made her proud, or Babs had gotten her cutie mark a few days before Apple Bloom, which made her proud!
2911496 Fixed! Wasn't their death sad?
2911925 Yes
It made me cry
Why are these stories so awesome!? Oh, the FEELZ!!!!!!!!!
Gahk!? HRK! "MINE FEEEEEEEEEEEEELS!"
Yay! fluttermac, daaa'w they had a foal, they-... BIG MAC YOU (censored) WHY I AUTA (censored) YOU UNWORTHY (censored)
scrap... that hurt...
(perhaps a wee bit rushed but, I definitely felt dem feels)
Jesus Christ, I have never seen anyone write Big Macintosh like that
it hurts so much. And then Applejack dropping the baby and...and...my god there's just so much
Why doesn't Big Mac f**k off Fluttershy and the baby! Seriously! It's
Anyway. When is chapter 2 going to be ready!
this story is full of broken fells
, big mac is a dick mite.
2925276 When I say paralyzed, she can't move her wings. She will forever be grounded. At least she's not blind. That was my original idea.
2954171 There's nothing wrong with writing Big Mac like that. Well... I personally would never write him like that, it's your call. My displeasure was directed at Big Mac himself not you the author.
2912274>>2914209>>2914243>>2914399>>2925276>>2928129>>2941563 Chapter 2 is out. This and the next chapter revolve around the mom, the next, the dad. Then we will get back to mac and Flutters
Gosh, this story. It's kind of heartbreaking to know that your parents died to rescue you, and that you can't repay them in any way. That really got to me and made me feel a bit sad. The feels got to me a bit, and that's good for the story.
Keep it up!
~Literary Luna
a short yet giving chapter
Gosh i love this i need more!!
Damn Mac, your such a douche in here. You were a skinny ass foal like Fluttershy once and your complaining about oversized wings? Your parents are dead, your grandma is ill as buck, get the hell over a disabled pegasus! It's yours!
Continuing would be great.
Not mean to be rude or something, but Aj's mom really looks like this
http://earthsong9405.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Mothers-2-411690786
or is it a coincidence?
and the death scene looks at LOT like this
http://naterrang.deviantart.com/art/Core-of-the-Apple-Part-3-385058908
and the father looks like him too... all to the bandana, though it could be another coincidence...