When Princess Celestia Suddenly falls ill, Princess Luna tasks Twilight and her friends with finding a cure.
Twilight and her friend's journey to discover a cure will take them to the very edges of the known world and then a little bit further.
(Takes place a few months after the changeling invasion of Canterlot)
[cover art by johnjoseco]
And a great many thanks to Barnabi for proofreading my story!
This is my first fic so please feel free to tell me just how much I screwed up in the comments.
Chapters (3)
Well well well... a fellow new writer! I have to say I like what I see so far. Please, continue!
2862370 Thank you kind sir I will do just that.
This story.
Just... this.
I really like what's going on so far. The formatting is off in a few areas, and your punctuation skills could use some working on, but you've got some great material right here.
2862726 thank you I'm glad you liked it. I don't know much about formatting or punctation and I have yet to find a proofreader, but I'll get one eventually
2862791 Best wishes!
Per mè Celestia è già sotto terra.
The beginning of this story follows a similar path to another story I saw Called the threat of change involving Celestia chrysalis Twilight and Luna. hopefully the author doesn't get too mad at the similarities.
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other than that it's a really good story.
2873349 huh I've never read that story before I promise. Also The story will be focusing more on the mane six rather than the princesses. Also I'm glad you liked it!
2873384 Sounds good, I was just being careful and letting you know ahead of time.
2873395 Thank you I appreciate it
Hello there! What might this little bitty gem be?
Whatever it is... You have my full attention!
~Skeeter The Lurker
So far... I like what I read.
Seems a bit OOC in some places, but other than that, not bad.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Not bad so far again, Do keep going.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2908811 Thank you!
More is on the way.
In pratica la rregina dei mutaforma è l'unica che possa salvare Celestia? La vedo male
This is interesting.