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this seems promising
by riot barding you mean based of fallout new vegas's riot riot armor right? if so then man this guy looks like a stone cold badass.
I like this lovely south park reference there look forward to more
2854507 I was thinking more along the lines of modern police riot gear, but hey, whatever floats your boat man
Haha I see the South Park reference
. Also so far so good. Just put bigger spaces between paragraphs. 
Still looking good keep on writing
frankly it seems more prudent to stay in the town, anyone from stable sixteen coming for him is gonna end up heavily out gunned and outmanned. if the lore is even a bit similar to the lore for vaults none had a particularly large armory. if he wants to leave i geuss thats his choice but the residents are hardly in danger.
three words
stone
cold
badflank!
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erm...what makes you say that?
2883341 firing heavy machinguns from a moving train at heavily armed people whos one desire is too kill you. whats not badflank about that?
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...touche
Some steel rangers are going to be pissed at this dude, but hopefully not too pissed since they're entire cargo might be lost otherwise...
Also, I think this colt might be tad strange mentally, though, I mean he murdered one pony even if his reaction might have been valid and probably caused that pony's brother brain damage. Doesn't seem to concern him at all. That's not even considering the 'raiders' at the school. I mean sure, they weren't exactly fine upstanding folk and he probably couldn't have rescued the foal without ending all the raiders' lives, but he just doesn't even care. I kinda feel like this dude's gonna end up a bit of a psychopath or have to express some kind of feeling about it, even if it's just admitting to being a bit emotion free in some respects.