One day, RG- 'The Railgun'- wakes up... as an adorable, brightly-colored horse pony. She has no bucking idea what's going on, no clue who she is... in fact, she's not even sure WHAT she is. She figures out she's a pony. She rolls with it. But when she starts getting cryptic advice in a weird dreamy-place, things get... well, more interesting.
She, along with the friends she meets, fights monsters (and stuff)... Kind of.
Think of it as RG telling a story.
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"It's hard to explain, really, but you should think of it as RG telling a story."
People use the description to decide if something will be worth a read or not. Saying 'it's hard to explain' denotes you as an author, and will make people shy away from reading, or make those that do read it, read it much harsher than if you explained it. It should not be 'hard to explain', as you're the author, and you know what will happen.
"A strange and amusing one at that.
Chapter Two is actually funny! (Yay!)"
Please leave this for the viewer to decide... as saying this will make people expect a laugh... and if it doesn't deliver, then they will most definitely voice it.
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Ah. Indeed!
I shall rectify these things post-haste!
I think I went a bit overboard on... whatever that was. I'm reading it in my head with an old-timey englishman voice, though.
Seriously, though- thanks. It's been a long time since I've been given any advice.
Question: am I ever going to get used to the way things work on FIMFiction?
I had to re-do this because it wasn't a reply.
2819048 Not a problem, and if you look around the groups a bit, you may find one that'll review and give you advice on your work.
And perhaps (I actually already saw the post before anyways.. eheheh).
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I kind of wish people had to leave a comment if they wanted to like/dislike.
The way it is, I just feel like they're disliking because of something random, like that the story involves Twilight as an alicorn instead of a unicorn, or that I put 'horse' in the description.
It does satisfy me that at least eight people have gotten far enough to form an opinion, though.
um.... are you sure you set up this chapter right. There's no paragraph breaks or punctuation.
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OH SWEET CELESTIA WHAT IS GOING ON
I... I guess I'll try reposting it, but I don't think I did anything different when I posted it this time...
Well, thanks for pointing it out- now I know to fix it!
it´s confusing