A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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I am really liking the character development
2822907 Then you shall remain happy!
I can expect her having kinky dreams about Rhino in three chapters time, and why is it that the adult section is in the basement? So far, Gel has met two of the elements, wonder how she will meet the rest?...15 bits she meats Rarity to talk about the outfit for work.
And are you doing this story as an experiment of sorts? Somehow, I can see them sleeping together in 5 days time, but thats just me.
Ooh the more that is added the more I love Gel as a character. Her speech is like Fluttershy's enough that it is cute but not to the point of it being dull.
Keep them coming man this is getting interesting real quick.
2824054 Experiment? Not sure, mostly this is just fun.
I find it amazingly interesting to read Angel with having an actual speech impediment. That stutter of hers is quite realistic. It isn't the usual "porky pig" type, but the real kind where they are trying to hide the stutter. Bravo, you have made it much more entertaining to read.
But Gel's still a bit of a Mary Sue.
You invade one measly capital and everyone hates you forever
"If he says 'magic' I'm going to scream."
I could not stop giggling at that exchange.
I am really getting the feeling a rookie was somehow given their first job that they got to choose. I doubt Gel has any previous experience at imitating a pony. Maybe she listened real well and followed orders but that is no reason to allow her to choose a position she is not prepared for.
Chrysalis sure doesn't train or prepare her troops very well. No wonder she got blasted out of Canterlot, it's even more amazing how she was able to get so far as well.
There's that impeccable training at work.
Pinkie is into home invasion now.
Angel is a Fluttershy clone.
Totally underplaying the situation a bit here.
I am really wondering how Gel could have proven herself trustworthy to Chrysalis to the point the queen would allow her to spy on her own. She seems to have no experience at all. Looking for the Elements wouldn't have been hard in a small town since she knew the names.
Falling into a pit of spikes from high up.
She gets up without a scratch. The spikes must have magically moved, just for her!
Interesting chapter. Gel seems rather unsure as to how to interact around ponies. What rank was she in the hive? A colonel? That's a pretty high rank.
~SolidFire
I loved it all I could not stop laughing it had a lot of funny parts.And Angle is adorable and so cute.I can't wait to see what happens next to her.
The other mare smiles. "Well, I'm the only librarian, so I suppose that would be correct. My name is Twilight Sparkle. So, was there a reason you came to library Angel? Besides to hug baby dragons of course."
The second to last sentence, 'So, was there a reason you came to THE library Angel?'
Just a head's up bro. I would use the quotation box, but I have no idea how.
I HATE it when fan fic authors address the element bearers AS the elements.
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Well, to be honest, there's a chance the Changelings don't realize the Elements and Bearers are separate.
Thus, it could be entirely justified at this point in the story.
Gel is like a mix of Fluttershy and Dory from Finding Nemo (cause memory problems)
4800768 just do [quote.] And [/quote.] Minus the period of course.
5020836 well one could argue(using the chest and equestria girls(which was confirmed as cannon)) that the bearers are the living embodiment of the elements and thus interchangeable with the elements. not to mention, it's the authors world maybe they are the elements and the artifacts are used to channel that power.
Loving how this is going man, hahaha, this is great! generally curious about the books she got :P
hehehe eue
nice job!
I like how you're using the hive kind as an excuse to explain the character more to use. GG m8
I'm loving this so far. Great use of the hive mind to explain herself to us
You know, I could comment normally about how nice this story is shaping up To be,
But the real moral of this comment is who cares? Free cupcake!
Are those really the traits she is described with. and that unexplainable behavior.
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lol
I wonder where pinkie would store her stuff if both her mane and tail were full.
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In the storage locker she rents form Celestia and Deadpool.
Since when does pinkie politely ask Somepony if they want a party or not?! Realistically speaking, I’m pretty sure she’d just throw a party regardless of Gels decision.
Makes sense.
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pinkie always makes sense silly!!
what!? no party is an option now for pinkie pie