A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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This fic is so good and interesting that I make a batch of popcorn to eat when I enjoy reading the updates
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Continue my good sir, Rhino!
Still amazing, and somehow getting better. That shouldn't be possible, and yet it is. Keep 'em coming please!
2847855>>2847844 Awww, thanks you guys! It really means a lot to know all of you are enjoying this!
There is something that makes me wonder. If Gel is blushing while on her disguise, does that mean that her disguise is magicly connected to her normal form, regestering every body change that she has? Because this makes me question wherever she is actually just acting to try and get love from Rhino, or are her emotions real and she just doesnt know it yet?
In a nut shell. Can she love or is it only a lie?
And also, Is this story gonna be a short one, or do you think you can expand it in the future? Seeing as how the events are transpiering, and that each day is about 3 chapters long, it seems like this may have either 6, 9, 15 or if there may be time skips, 50 (or less, I can see reaching up to 2 weeks time) chapters left.
2850208 You underestimate this story. Time skips are a possibility, but probably not long ones, maybe a few days. But we have plans for this to go on for at least a few months of in-story time.
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"at least a few months of story time"
2850891 That sounds good then, better for this to last even longer!
Oh, and I don't know if you are having someone make your cover art for the story, so until its done, you can use this one, seeing as E didn't show it to you.
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I find this self insert wired and confusing.
But that stutter!!
She says she has never teleported but she was on the roof... why didn't he pick up on this... or am I misreadin it?
Wrong use of this term. Surface tension is the force between molecules of a liquid at the boundary layers. It is the reason papers clips can be carefully floated on water.
You tell the reader the name but not really the reason behind the name. I am thinking resolution at the moment and it doesn't make sense.
3363050 first of all I loved this chapter so much it just keeps getting better and better.I loved how they are getting closer and closer.there so cute together.I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens next to them.And second she didn't teleport she flow .And he probably thinks she levitated herself up there.
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Then again, she is a Changeling. She could just changed herself to be a Pegasus...
And I do agree with you about this chapter. The flow of the relationship is nice pace at this point.
"Hmm..." He grabs a cup of punch with his magic to fiddle with as he thinks. "A few come to mind: Twilight the librarian, Rarity, who made me a very nice fedora and is lovely to chat with, Applejack run the local farm where the cow herd lives, everypony knows Pinkie, Lily, Daisy, and Roseluck the flower trio..." He points out each pony as he lists them.
*Applejack RUNS the local farm*
So if Gel is dead set on a mission to survey the Harmony Bearers and parasitically feed off a random pony she's living with, why is she suddenly hurt by not being kissed by Rhino? I used to dismiss her nervous behaviour as part of her disguise, but now I'm not so sure.
Also, WHY IS THIS STORY SO FREAKING LONG!? I don't think I can make it to 75 chapters!
Why does everyone's personality seem to change all the time?
DARN! You got so close! You could've gotten him to kiss you if you were lucky enough, it would be a risk, a risk I'm willing to take.
Awesome chapter well done, well done man :d hehehe.
She is so cute, hehehe.
Frigging berry, you're drunk XD
the image that popt in my head at that is to funny
This was great! Slightly boner inducing for some reason, but great!
No offense but this story is very difficult to read. A lot of things that are said simply don't fit, and it feels extremely robotic if not awkward.
I just noticed that you used tension (float) and I have been put friction (grip)
With surface tension one would either sink or stay about the surface.
Friction either lets you slide/skid (Negative) or stop/walk (Positive).
Sorry just now caught it.
I suddenly Imagined your voice saying the lines. It was different for a while, but then I recalled your voice, and tried fitting it to your character.
Actually, it is a dance. I believe it's called... whatever you call the dance used in a mosh pit.
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Well it's definitely not the wall of death...
Don't think Equestria's that barbaric.
Other than that, what about just 'Moshing'?
Or a new one just invented called, 'The Flail'?
:P
OK!
This just got so much more in depth, thank you. ^^
At least now if they 'fall in love' there'll be Much More backstory than just being roomies. Thank you thank you :D!
BERRY PUNCH WHY
*Narrows eyes*
Didn't she only have a day of love left?
Apparently you've never heard of Moxie. Now THAT is an acquired taste.
i am really starting to wonder if this IS her first infiltrator mission ore if she's just pulling an act xD
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She was shown to be a bit clueless before she even got there, but she has also mentioned doing other missions, I'm assuming part of it is an act, and the other part is the lack of hivemind