A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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About damn time
Haha so much awkwardness xD
such a good story keep up the good work
An incredible advance in one single chapter .
Also, too much awkwardness .
2895146
Agreed!
Heh, loving this so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.... and the first date.
2898090 I am always looking forward to the next chapter.
2898098>>2898090
It always gives me a warm feeling to see people excited for the next installment.
2895343 no applejack... nobody loves her anyway.
2899980 *sagely nod* poor Applejack
Cute cuddles and stutters with a mare who has a memory problem.
What happened to her being a Changeling?
OH MA GURD I LOVE DEH CUDDLEZ!!
3368757 She's still a changeling, just showing real emotions. Well, that's how I take it.
Alright, moving on to spaces after ellipses.
I loved it all so much I'm so happy that they are finally together.And she can have a taste of true love and have it erase all the evil and turn completely good 100% I can't wait to see what happens next between them and what happens to them next.it just keeps getting better and better.
now was your day?"
I'm not sure what chapter this is on... I think it is on chapter 13, Could be 12. Either way this is the first misspelling I seen thus far.
The "Now" I believe was suppose to be "how"
I like the story thus far, Its not the best but I give it a solid 8 out of 10...
I'll keep reading it because its intersting... I kinda wonna know what happens next. I also wonna see what happens after others find out she is a Changeling... That will be most intersting! But I'm guessing that mite not happen for a while. There are like 97 chapters after all...
Anyway... Onwards with the reading!
5053573 I agree
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So much adorable awkwardness... Awkwardorableness?
Also, Celestia's beard, finally!
Cya
Raziel-chan
"Time is almost impossible to tell in dreams..."
well... not entirly true. a full nights dreaming (10 hours) can be 2 weeks of time in a dream. no timeskips. but only the last hour of the dream is remembered by most. im a bit more noting on dream behaver
7097326 That actually makes sense! Genius!
Ahem.
O woe is me, for I have splashed a drink in my eyes! Whatever shall I do?! I am utterly helpless in the face of this calamity!
What's that? A washcloth?
My hero! You have rescued me from the foul clutches of a glass of lemonade. Surely this must be destiny!
Well that's a FAIR AMOUNT of sauce
Hope it doesn't keep up
PFFFT