A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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OH NO! NOT THE ELITES! If they're anything what I think they are, then it doesn't matter who a pony may be, they're screwed beyond belief
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and this was the chapter I was waiting for!
cant wait to see more
Alright now we're cookin'!
Considering your co-writer, it's not a surprise that Enigma finds his way into this story. Even if he is just a gender-flipped disguise and a mention. It was a stroke of luck, I think, that Gel was able to ninja her way out of there. The only question on my mind about this is, is Rhino's home already covered by the network? If it is, then Gel's pretty much screwed.
I believe that if she can find a way to get in and out detected, she should get to the Everfree for a while so she do some training. If her previous encounter with the Changelings is any indication, she's going to need to level up her game. As well as not get cocky, which nearly cost her the last time.
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Given their interactions so far, that's not exactly inaccurate...
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If you remember, in the chapter, Gel said that the poles are every 30 yards, but there isn't one within 50 yards of their house, so they are currently in a hole in the network.
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Huh. Have no idea how I missed that.
This chapter made me hate Twilight.
"Home sick" only works for maybe a week. They're planning in only the most temporary terms.
They need to contact Twilight and arrange for Gel to officially defect and claim asylum; anything else will only result in abject failure.
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Rhino is understandably a bit if-ish on revealing Gel to ponies, given past experiences and his general paranoia about what could go wrong.
I think the journals would actually be a wonderful way for Twilight to really find out about Gel and her situation. Just drop them off with Spike while Twilight isn't home, and then once she reads them, everything will be made clear.
Of course, if Gel is keeping detailed notes on everything, that could also be a very quick road to embarrassment for both Twilight and Gel...
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They still have no other viable option. Have a controlled first contact situation where Gel can establish it as an act of good faith, or have an uncontrolled first contact situation where Gel will be treated with presumption of malice aforethought and her claims considered disingenuous. One puts her in an excellent position to be accepted, the other puts her in an excellent position to be accepted into a prison cell after she is TO THE MOON'd.
Gel I could understand being apprehensive about apprehension, but Rhino was socialized in this environment and all the evidence points to ponies putting absolute faith in Celestia and her judgement. Rhino should be planning on leveraging Twilight's unmatched connection with the princesses to get Gel a chance to plead her case - the very idea that Celestia would decide against Gel, and the love she shares with Rhino, would be literally unthinkable to him.
How does that line go? "I ain't out ta' fool god, just his fan club"? All they need to do is get to the princesses without Gel being caught as a spy, and they're set.
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Assuming Celestia doesn't hold any small bias against changelings for defeating her in combat and invading her city. Unlikely, but it's these small doubts that build up and prevent Rhino from taking action right now.
Purely a logic battle at this point though, don't worry, we've got a plan. Bu ti think you guys will have something else to talk about next chapter.
I swear this played out a lot more humorously in my mental movie.
OMG this is bad I hope that Rhino and Gel are going to be ok this chapter had my heart beating like crazy.I can't wait to see what happens between Gel and Rhino and what happens next to them all.And it looks like Rhino is going to have to speed up his plans to propose to Gel.
Quick, Rhino, put your low res on, get a hoodie and grind all those detectors into uselessness.
Cya
Raziel-chan
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Jet Set Radio?
PAYING FOR THE SMOKE BOMB HOLY YES
(Oof that was close)