A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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All i can say about this chapter is : DAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW! SO CUTE
Chapter 50: "And Now, For Something Completely Different"
Well, now we have an exact timeframe for this story, if it wasn't established already.
Also, Gel is now best Trixie victim.
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You know... that is a good point.
AGH GOD MY HEART EXPLODED...I LOST COUNT OF HOW MANY TIMES AFTER 35...
Mini... changeling... GAH!
Too much cute...
I had forgotten changeling baby's were tennis ball size so when you put that I was like....what the hell just happened?
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Only thing on this whole thing worth the comment is: WEAPONIZED CUTENESS
SHUT UP FLUTTERSHY YOU GOT NO CHANCE UP AGAINST THIS CUTENESS!. awww I'm so sorry! Plz forgive me!
(Gel). Duz she need a hug? Is night being meany?
#*thump*#
Being able to skip around and read part of a chapter is getting to be a little too much for me.
Everything seemed pretty transparent from what I have read. There's seems to be a lot of telling language instead of showing, I don't think the internal monologuing helped in that respect. Gel didn't seem much different from how Fluttershy is portrayed in many stories. For me, it really became a little grating since it did not match Gel's backstory. The psychic link seemed a bit hokey and I think it hurt the story overall. I have noticed some improvements since your first chapter but I cannot quite name them off the top of my head other than using ellipses correctly.
Was anyone else especting her memory to be on the fritz again after that?
In ever instance where you used the word "pupa" i think you should have used the word "larva" instead. The pupa stage is much like a cocoon or chrysalis, thus, if Gel were in here pupa stage during this chapter, i doubt she would have been able to move around or talk to Rhino.
I loved it all so much it was the cutest chapter I have ever read in my life. .
4386777 I agree changeling (nymphs?) are adorable!!!
DAAWWWW this chapter so sweet it could give a person diabetus
To translate: try and see if Trixie's there to give her a beat down.
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Rage translator: If you see that Tricky bitch, pimp slap that hoe.
That's not simply weaponised cuteness, that's a cuteness WMD.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Ditzy is such a sweetheart oh my god I cannot properly communicate how much I adore her
Also: cute AF chapter
this time line makes no sense, twilight didn't get a pet until after she became an alicorn, and she didn't have this dual with trixe when she was analicorn