A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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I think my favourite highlights of this chapter happen to be:
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And of Course
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I always enjoy reading chapters from this, it just has such an upbeat vibe :D
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A very appropriate comment given your username and avatar/
Upon reading this chapter this is my response. Cuteness Level: OVERLOADED!
And I now have a new theory for Gel memory issue:
• Normal changelings who get a personality for themselves, actually get them by copying the personality of a pony, giving them some characteristics resembling the original pony. But because of this they start to become the pony slowly, getting their memories in the process, so to avoid that the Queen puts an amnessia spell when they have achived a resonable level of self dependant, making them forget any new memories that they may develop, hence why Gel forgets everything at midnight.
As if this applies to all drones and nymphs? I'm not sure, as Chrysalis and Mimic are the only other changelings that show to have a individual personality. You can PM me to tell me if I'm right or not, that includes you too, Vi and E.
Just wanted to point out this doubled paragraph
Otherwise this was very enjoyable chapter.
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You win this section of the comments.
Ya know if rhino keeps this up he's gonna have a whole city of mares who want him, he's got gel, Silk is close, and shy might start liking him because of his closeness to animals
Nice to see she's overcoming her stutter. I found the animals to be most entertaining.
Also, try using past tense words. Unless it's a script fic or in second person, it isn't a good idea to use only future tense.
I think you ment to say "solid brown"
After this paragraph I half expected a song to start... (put on the find a pet song anyway.)
Super cute chapter anyway. Hnnnnnnnnngggg. *keels over*
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Actually, he is solid black. The lines are white.
I loved it all this chapter was absolutely adorable.And cute beyond belief .I can't wait to see what happens next between them next and what happens next to them.And all three little ones are so cute.And it was a little funny how Mercury won't let them leave without him.
I know I may be a bit late, but I like the name Mercury here. The element mercury is a silvery liquid, and is also known as quicksilver, and the Roman god Mercury is the counterpart to the Greek Hermes, trickster god of thieves. Quick, trickster, thief, a stereotypical fox. A perfect name for a silver fox, Mercury.
4352593 you also forgot that mercury is the only metal that is a liquid at normal temperatures. as a liquid it's form isn't fixed and in eastern mythology foxes are trickster, shape-shifting spirits. not to mention, mercury was the most commonly used ingredient in elixirs of immortality which again links the fox to the kitsune.
Silly Rhino, there's no protecting or escape from the cute.
Cya
Raziel-chan
ok... so Gel has been into the everfree... ?!?! could she have had a strong memory before/during the invasion?? was throw into a poison joke patch after the shield went back up?! this is getting to be a seariusly interesting fic...
btw. fav incoming!!!
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it took me about 12 minuts to read this chapter 8k+ words. i think im slowing down in my reading!! lol or it could be that i read half of it again after i first made the original part of this post.
AHA! Caught like a deer in headlights!
It is coming for you you cheeky changeling spy!
I... how did you get that reference? Does Shutterfly somehow exist in-universe? ANSWER ME, STATIC, UNCHANGING TEXT ON MY SCREEN.
He's a Disney Princess...
Or he's Turing Test but I doubt many people will get that reference sadly.
THREE PETS WOW
Curiouser and curiouser
So is her being disconnected from the hive why her memory is what it is?
The coat color of the kitten is actually called Prussian Blue. On a cat it actually looks almost like it shifts between grey and blue in certain lighting conditions. It's one of my favorite coat colors.