A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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I kinda anticipated this, but it had to have happened eventually, hopefully now she has closure......... or is this just the beginning~ xD
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I get the feeling that only the tip of the shit has hit the fan. The rest has yet to come.
For instance, I'm waiting for when Chrysalis finds her way back into the picture.
Also, Silk confirmed for worst manager in Equestria.
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I don't think her actions were completely unreasonable given the circumstances.
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Sure they were. Silk fired Gel because Gel already had what Silk wanted. That's pretty damn petty.
Really, she can't hold the property damage against Gel because Gel isn't the cause of the damage to begin with. If anything, she would be able to hold the jerk in the booth and maybe Rhino responsible since it was their actions that led to the damage in the first place. All Gel did in the situation was nearly get raped, which wasn't even her fault.
Granted, Gel isn't completely innocent because she rubbed her relationship in Silk's nose a bit, but the loss of her job came purely from jealousy on Silk's part. If anything, you give Gel the rest of they day off and maybe then next too so that you both have time to cool off and get the damage repaired. Firing somepony because they're in a relationship with somepony you like is petty and foalish.
Given the situation, though, I only wish that Gel gave Silk a bigger piece of her mind. Then again, at least one TV in my house has an episode of The Real Housewives on screen at virtually all times, so maybe expecting a verbal sparring match is asking a little too much.
Finally a red mane!!! MUAHAHAHA!!! Everybody is angry!!
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Sorry, Rhino, but I have to completely agree with Mystic on this one. Honestly, I also think your namesake should have backed Gel up on this one, not tried to apologize to Silk. Having my girlfriend nearly raped, then blamed for it, would get me almost as mad as the near rape itself.
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He did what he did because he saw all sides of it. It is difficult if not impossible to rationalize with people who are recently heartbroken. Confronting them about it only makes them lock up half the time. Gel already lot her temper and told her off and Silk didn't really appear to outwardly react. Adding to this only would make the situation worse. It was best for all parties involved to take a step back and see where things go while they cool down.
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Ah. Well, differing points of view, I guess. Personally, I think Silk just showed her true colors. Seriously, if I had been one of the people eating there when that little scene went down, I would never go to the place again. Also, I would make it very clear that Silk's behavior was unacceptable, and that it was the reason I was never going to come back. Frankly, I think Gel's reaction was the only sane one there.
However! That having been said, I would like to very much provide my congratulations on another wonderful chapter.
I know, I know, kinda 180 there, but still, you do amazing work, despite my little grievances, and I am very much looking forward to where you are going with all of this. Let us continue to enjoy the delight that is Gel and Rhino!
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Indeed, and don't worry, we've got plans for everything.
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Meh. I can see where author Rhino is coming from in regards to story Rhino's inaction. True, his special somechangeling* was sexually assaulted, but trying to defend Angel on the heels of defending her from certain rape would've only made the situation worse. His emotions at the time were strained, so lashing out at Silk would've been counter-productive.
Besides, I would rather not do business with an unprofessional owner by choice rather than being barred from returning. After all, being banned makes you look bad, while staying away from and spreading the word about a bad business owner hurts them.
Then again, this is coming from a guy who wished that things got a little "project-ish," in the words of Steve Harvey, so my opinion may be a little skewed.
In the end, the coolest head did prevail, as Rhino's birthday ended on something of a high note anyway.
On an unrelated note, this is the first story that's ever rustled my customer service jimmies. Congratulations on that.
*This term has been copyrighted** by Mystic Deadman. You must pay a quarter every time you say it***.
**No, it actually hasn't.
***No, you don't.
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I just want to say I love all this discussion you guys have about stuff like this. It really helps me feel like you guys are liking the story when you debate parts of it like this.
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It's a great story! Expect stuff like this!
Honestly I would have expected this story to get more attention. Maybe Silk can redeem herself?
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You'll see. *Looks away with a knowing smirk.*
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Heh. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
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You best watch your mouth, boy.
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"...what do you mean, your 'customer service jimmies'? What, specifically, did that, I mean?"
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Before I get to my response...
HOLY SHIT!!!!
Ahem...
Sorry about that. Anyway.
I used to be a manager for a store, and am a team leader in a restaurant. I'm one of the few in my position that give a damn about the people I work with and the people we attend to. So when I read or hear about something like what happened in the latest chapter, I get a little more than a little irritated about it.
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"Ah. That makes perfect sense, then. What was with that outburst, though?"
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Never expected one of my comments to get enough of your attention to get a reply from you.
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"...oh. Well, then...glad I could make you happy?"
Eh that was a little harsh on silks part but I can see where she is coming from with they whole heart break thing,but I was kind of expecting Angel to punch her for that because I have seen it happen again and again and that situation was extra bad shoot I don't even think I could keep my cool that well after that>>3003743
I read it before, but I forgot to put in a comment related to bees/Changelings.
Bees abandon a hive when it is on fire (no duh, it's like if a house was on fire, they don't just sit around drinking cups of tea all day)
With Gel's mane having turned to practically flames, the abandonment of leaving the restaurant from the cause of that rectifies the bee analogy.
^ Alright, I think i've gone overboard with the bee referances, but I bet one day I wouldn't be able to make one because I've already said it before
My real comment would've been: Oh boy, I do love the signs of intensive of planning in the morning!
This was a wham episode made to give a plot point.
And where's her adorable stutter?? D:
Actually using swear words instead of the horribly downplayed "buck" or "hay".
I salute you.
How to describe blue Rhino : sweet
How to describe red Rhino : HE'S THE MAN
If it turns out that Rhino is achangeling ill freak.
I loved it it was a awesome chapter except for that asshat Dude and his moron friends.And I'm sad that Gel and Silk friendship went like I hope that they make up and Silk finds a awesome guy to love he like she deserves.And Rhino red is cool as blue Rhino is awesome I like them both.I can't wait to see what happens between Gel and Rhino next and what happens to them next.
I'm too pessimistic to read this story. Its way too unrealistic for my tastes. I mean in all fairness I was rooting for the perv. This is the real world. You cant rip doors off hinges and forcefully grab someone or threaten them for no reason. All I have going through my mind is how the "Hammer" would go on and rant about how simply because he hit on her doesn't give rhino permission to be violent and he would go and make a big scene stating how he wasn't violent and to prove it point out that neither Rhino or Angel had any marks or bruises or burns of the such and how much bullshit it is that they think they can act like this because he was "Rude" and than he would just kinda make everyone feel bad and guilty and turn himself into the victim. The point is that I should use the dark tag more often. Very well written story though.
5384309 dude, this is fan-FICTION also, he wasn't just hitting on her, he tried to fucking RAPE her. Personally I would have done much worse, much, much worse. You can't blame a book for being 'unrealistic' especially if it's fiction.
5652163 if I was Rhino I would have turned up the resistance to max and see how that works for hammer
Aww... I hope they'll make up in the future. Bit I can't help but think Gel didn't really do anything wrong, she didn't do shy damage, it was Rhino, and the attempted rapist should be glad that she only threatened him and didn't rip his nuts off.
Though she overdid it with how she broke the news of her relationship with Rhino to Silk.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Damn this was a crappy night for gel. Hope it will be better for her.
Hmmm...
Now that I am thinking about it, shouldn't love strengthen Discord's power?
Because what is more chaotic than love?
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Good point
Um, excuse me?
EXCUSE ME?
E X C U S E M E ?
Oof, you took it better than I did. I would've aimed for the bitch's FACE with that bag.
After this I wonder: How did Gel become a colonel in the changeling army? Not even thinking about her being physically superior to some (actually only one) drunk colt but at least psychologically you would expect more stability and professionalism from a changeling colonel, not nearly bursting into tears.
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When in military mode her personality shifts?
THAT BITCH MUST DIE FOR MIS TREATING ONE OF MY KIND