A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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Looks like she has the right idea about this story
Ooh. With each story this gets more and more interesting. I love how you have Gel sort of wondering what Angel is doing at some times instead of her being in complete control. *leans closer. Keep going
Wait he's a vet?!? Can I please use Rhino in my story?
2828082 Sure thing, want to let me know more details in a PM? I literally have an absurd amount of detail for him.
2828095
Yeah may take a bit though because I'm stuck without my laptop so I will as soon as I get the chance.
Again, love how the stutter is only around when she talks to others, just like a real stutter is in real life!
However, her memory problem is a bit confusing. It seems to be presented as fake, but Gel's habits point to it being true.
She glances at the clock, noting that it was almost noon. "...An hour of free time...what is there to do that won't ruin my outfit?"
The jingle of keys and the click of the lock draws her attention. Rhino walks in as he looks to the side, dropping his saddlebags in the corner. He calls out as he sifts through them. "Angel, I'm back!"
I thought: perfect, freakin timing
Also: I don't care if she's undercover: she's in love
2828095
Dude... I LOVE THIS! Gel is hilarious and the way your character is set up is ingenious! (Really smart if your not) MOAR!
She also has memory problems? Grrrreeeeaaaat...
Not sure why talking about work times would bring up red flags compared to a couple of her other actions.
What is wrong with lust? It was fine for sustaining in chapter two.
Cause taking clothes off is so much worse than walking around in the buff.
She forgot to write things down didn't she?
Okay so I'm slightly confused..........are the memory problems a changeling thing or a Gel thing?
Why would the café make the maids wear short skirts so that other ponies could "have a view?" Aren't the ponies already naked anyway? I'm kind of confused. Other than that, I'm liking this story.
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Think of it like this,
Its the anticipation and excitement you feel from getting a tease or taste of what you want.
I loved it all it so sweet how close they are getting.And I'm happy she doing while at her job.it has so awesome sweat parts and some awesome funny .It just keeps getting better every chapter..
4045254 Revealing clothing is considered more sexy than nudity by many people because the brain has a tendency to fetishize thing that we are told are sexy, and since revealing clothing is considered sexy by many people more people are likely to develop a fetish for it, TL:DR it is more sexy than nudity because people consider it more sexy.
6440709 the term you are looking for is "accentuates".
Huh, are the memory problems a Gel or a Changeling thing?
So fat so good, I'm quite sure Gel would hey along quite nicely with Flutters... Unless they'd spend all the time silent add both would be too shy to start a conversation.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Gloriously well done~ Hahahaha! This little place she's working at sounds fun :P hehehe eue
Nicely done, nicely done!
I'm severely in question to how Gel is being treated at work. Sure she's new and needs to learn the ropes, but it was obvious from the other mares that they are picking on her, thinking it's fun. Now, understandably, they went through it themselves at one time or another, so I can't be too judgmental, but Miss Tease never told her about that little detail when asking about the job. It was simply springing it on her and enjoying her humiliation with the rest. In my book, that is a bad work ethic of the boss to her employees. I can only hope she gets used to the humiliation further down.
A pony running in circles, trying to catch it's tail, plus the jingling sound.
I can't get that image out of my mind.
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yeaaaaaahhh... i'm with you on this. plus, that outfit was absolutely sluttish.
Huh. Can't absorb lust? That's actually kind of unique as far as these stories go.