A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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Aww. I was kinda hoping something exciting would happen this chapter.
Well, something other than .
Y'know, something to make Rhino regret taking that necklace off.
It's good to see that they're taking baby steps with her swimming, though. Maybe if they get far enough along, it'll be a skill she can make use of later on.
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Kind of a tease chapter ain't it?
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Not nearly as much of a tease as Gel and Rhino are.
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Amen to that.
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Awww, thank you very much!
My only problem with this chapter is that, now that you've set the changelings on alert, the tension from the anticipation is too high for me to properly enjoy this kind of scene anymore.
EDIT: Perhaps ironically, mentioning them more would've been better. Specifically, because the problem isn't the knowledge that they're coming. The problem is that, since I'm not the author, I don't know when they're going to arrive, so I wind up getting all worked up over the possibility that they could, in theory, burst in at any moment outside the sensual segments.
I'm 38 chapters in. Why hasn't Gel use her Changelings powers to turn into anypony Rhino would like for some sexy fantasy time.
Or anal.
I expect either one of those by the time I'm done.
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You have a shitstorm on the horizon, and have a chapter all about taking one bath.
That's Slice of life done right.
Um... I think I found a big glaring plot hole and I don't mean Gel's sexy posterior. During Gel's spa date with Silk she took a herb bath without a single worry and in fact actually enjoying it. With that in mind her feeling uncomfortable with a bath seems unnatural.
Have a good day.
That one guy that keeps poking at all your tiny mistakes with a stick.
Also known as DarkPinkie or alek4ever.
3384719 Ahh, but you see, my dear pinkie, she was Angel at the time.
Angel doesn't have holes in her hoof, which is where the reported discomfort comes from.
either that or I'm talking out of my arse and that really is a plothole we may never know...
3155578 I know right it's got me antsy expecting them to show up at any second.while there guard.at least them have a hint that they are coming so they can have some way to defend themselves.my heart just won't stop beating waiting for the other shoe to drop.other than that it had half of me cracking up at how Gel was acting like a little filly.the other half worry was going to happen at any second.I can't wait to see what happens between Gel and Rhino next and what happens next to them.
I always found filling around in a bathtub extremely hawt for some reason. Not chapter.
Cya
Raziel-chan