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little dashie


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Comment cock block!!!

*feels like such a troll to friends*

Already read this. Damn... Sometimes being your Pre-Reader/editor is annoying :|

305554 I'd say deal with it but already did over skype...

Ice

Took you long enough.

305631 STFU and thumb it up... I hate 50/50... People don't know how to actually read the prequels or the descriptions...

Ice

305633 Hey, I do know how to read them I'm just saying it took you a while to do it. Also if you want a proper dam comment here I go *Ahem* Yet again you've shown that you can write extremley well in a second person perceptive even though it is probably one of the harder ones not to annoy the reader with. Also you seem to have done the whole "Starting halfway" thing really well and I look forward to more.

Ice

305644 You start in a situation in which you and the characters understand but we are filled in along the way.

305645 Oh that lol... Thanks

Hey you want chapter two toread now?

I don't mind pushing it out... I got four typed but I have to finish editing 'The Perfect Assassin'

305658 The fires of hell hath no fury like mine....

Ice

There wasn't much furnishings in the small house. I just want to point out it should be There weren't many furnishings in the small house.

Ice

The cieling was cracked and looked very unstable The ceiling

305667 STFU

Phantom didn't send me the edits... Hes an ass

Ice

305669 Dude calm down I'm just point them out.....also it's you're awake not your awake.

Ice

And Frost is back.

Ice

Okay, so despite a couple of erros(Which you said Phantom hasn't sent you the edit fair enough) this is a really good chapter. It's good to see a small brake from the serious stuff with Frost and Rainbow Dash there so as always keep it up.

Ice

305688 Because I've seen really good stories turn into crapfests so I don't want to have to thumb this down if that happens.

Y U TAKE SO LONG TO FINALLY UPLOAD!?

Also, I'm liking Summer Dawn's attitude, you've captured it well :pinkiehappy:

I give this story, currently, 3 Yay's!

:yay::yay::yay:

Ice

305713 Still no thubuming it up until later though.

Wait... so big Mac is chasing...somepony in the woods and another pony is sad at a bar... yep you lost me

305788 (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ Y U NO READ THE STORIES THAT COMES BEFORE THIS? THIS IS A SQUEAL!! (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ

Ice

305788 Dude, unlike the other two I won't rage. It's better if you read the other but it still makes sense without reading them.

Ice

306132 Oh, by the way do you want any help with the proofreading?

306139 Nope I'm good now! Thanks for the offer!

Finally reading this....and I gotta say that this was EPIC!
and evrything is still the same about my OC except that he has Lightning Powers.

Rainbow kissed him? I thought she was a lesbian.
Black stallion,rude....me possibly?
Maybe,like where this is going thought. Tracked,Thumbs Up and all that.

Ice

"She likes stabbing people..."

"Do not try to jump into the story."

"But I wanna."

"No."

"WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAA!"

326877 he's got four mares...

327204 lolwut....

Ice

327278 She is awesome.

327281 i don get it...

why u confuse me...

Ice

327287.......How can you not get it? I said she was awesome.

Find the one of Light and Dark?

You will find the stallion you are looking for in Dune. He's been waiting here a long time. He has probably forgotten why he is even living in that small town. He can't leave without you. Happy hunting???

Odd.

327295 no longer confused...

FINALLY!!!!

(edit)
NOW that I've read......So your going to meet up with me.....excellent.

So you sleept with Summer......awesome.

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