little dashie
Joined 5th Jan, 2012 ·
Offline
Stats
Page generated in 0.131 seconds
Total duration
787 users online
1,121,634 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
What a terribly sad story... Bravo, manly tears were shed.
Not bad could have been a little longer but overall it was pretty good! Keep it up!
185921 im not much of a long chapter writer... this was short and sweet because most ponies don't like a 10k word story...
185892 Thanks glad i could make you cry! I expected some to cry but not immediately...
Anyways thanks for the support if you liked it and would like a more lasting story check out my other publishments on my page... I have a two story fic right now that will last a while... The only turn off(teehee) is that its a second pony story... Still worth checking out due to some really cool thong i incorporate into my fanbase...
"what's the scouter say about his power level?" "Its 1006... Kick his ass napa!"
-Dashie
186215:BRAVO Sir..........Bravo.....
....
That is all.
at least honey got what he deserved in the end...
sad ending and i didnt expect her to be pregnant...
you just had to kill oak didn't you
you could have let him live
191932 Ain't i such a dick?
It was a good little story. Some issues I had were, typo's, and grammar. Some of the dialogue, and timeline got a little hard to follow, and the main thing was it felt rushed. Still, I did enjoy it.
I didn't plan on crying today, but good job on the story.
Damnit, I felt my heart beat.
But, I guess it was worth it.
if this story was written by someone who knows how to write then I would be crying, but right now I'm not sure if I should compliment you for not making me cry or insult you for not making me cry.
You should get a proof reader to go over this for you. But good story. A bit jumpy in time, leaving me slightly confused. But sad none the less.