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little dashie


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Will have to read soon Little Dashie.

Earlier then first. I read this story before is was posted.

306253 Just because your an editor doesn't give you bragging rights....

306257 And why not? I got rid of dozens upon dozens of errors. I think I earned a little bit of bragging rights :moustache:

306259 Because most editors I've noticed, don't go bragging about how they read it earlier then anyone else. A lot of other people could been picked to 'proof read' a story.

306344 ^ But please don't rub it in to him... I pride myself in flame free comments...

306347 My bad, twas just my two cents.

Errr, also, i spotted something in the very beginning you might want to fix. You repeated the journal entry twice, as well as some lines after it..

306363 Thanks I was wondering about that

306363 There you go! just refresh the page!

BBB

hey if i come with some concepts for this storie can i just throw them your way or is it a authors only thing?

334982 yeah im open for anything...

Second.
I wonder what good it will serve to have the hero off himself.

...the moment you reveled luna i went "WHAT THE FUCK, HOW THE:rainbowhuh:, ....WHAT....WHAT.....WHAT....I HAVE NO IDEA.....did i read that right?....WHAT WHAT WHAT?"....now MOAR NOW!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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