When a man finds himself in Equestria, apparently punching a pony princess in the face is a poor first action. Now stuck there, he must come to terms and cope with his, err... her new life.
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'Twilight willing to prank Celestia? I'm not sure if this makes Luna a good influence, a bad one, or just a quintessentially Lunar one.
Also, kudos on the use of "æther." It is a good word, and æ is best letter.
In all, a fine transitory chapter. The story has gotten settled and its overall direction is clear. Now we can move on from the introduction to vengeful shenanigans, which are easily among the top five varieties of shenanigans. I look forward to them.
Aside from a few issues such as homophone confusion in an instance where you confuse main for mane, and a tense issue where "have ran" should read have run, this was all-in-all a good chapter.
I know all about those writing slumps too. Especially when you get all sorts of nifty distractions like video games coming out, eh?
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I have to agree with you. The use of æ instead of the simplified "e" spelling almost makes those words seem more... lively. In all honesty, it even feels better to read when I see it, rather than causing me to stutter on the phrase.
palette --> palate
DIABEETUS
YES YES YES. LET'S PRANK CELLY
still good
ho yeahtime to prank
Oorah! Prank time Trollestia!
Just letting you know, I can't remember if you wanted corrections or not, I just rolled with "or not" since you are writing for fun. But there are some...
FUCK!
YEAH!
They are? I thought that was daffodils.
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Good word yes. Good world... only the light version... Sometimes. Also a decent attack.
Whoo! go revenge prank Tia! Just watch out for her retaliation!
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That was horrible. Good job.
I can't wait to see what they've cooked up for Celly.
Yes it had to be done I'm sure I would do the same on some alien planet no matter what the food is!
Must say that this story escalated quite quickly, but it's fine for a clop fic, I guess.
Also, daises aren't toxic to humans.
3083993 no, he didn't say daisies were... he said daffodils were.
Broken.
Broken.
Broken.
Broken.
Broken.
Broken.
Broken.
I imagine that, as the element and ruler of magic, Twilight really is teleporting things to and from the æther. She probably has the æther indexed alphabetically by object names, by time of last teleport, by descriptive keywords, and about a million other parameters.
I forgot this
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/000/228/733/pinkie_pie_diabeetus.jpg
I loved it all so much it was awesome I can't wait to see what happens next and what the prank will be
Ok. You can't just claim to be "damned if I can ever remember [...]" and then spout off the answer with no issues, no stopping to think, no flub ups...
You're making the rest of us look bad!
Celestia is going to be pranked so hard up the ass with a banana, hopefully literally.
I'm so dumb, I just noticed seven chapters in that Elam is male backwards.
6322615 I don't think I'd have noticed if you hadn't mentioned it...
Goddamn ponies being so cute giving us diabeetus
Wow, Elam sure is dumb if this is his thinking. Humans have a HUGE impact on our planet, as is undeniably proven at this point. Still, Most Hippies do go a bit far with their nonsense.
And PETA is treated as a terrorist organization due to the bs they pull. I'm all for treating animals well, but they are insane.
There is no dilemna. Waffles are unquestionably the superior breakfast bread.
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Nahh, whatever humans did couldn't even hold a candle to events such as the Chicxulub meteor, and even then the Earth survived.
The "planet" as a mass of rock floating in space will 100% survive whatever it is we can throw at it, and life in general always adapts to and beyond whatever extinction events that comes next. When someone is saying that humans is "destroying the planet", in actuality they're saying that humanity is turning the planet uninhabitable for humans. The planet itself will always survive.