You know, sometimes I wonder how I get myself into these things. Maybe it's because I did something. Pissed some god off... maybe. Now I'm falling into some show for children- literally. Knowing myself, I'm probably not going to have much luck at all...
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I'm going to assume he ended up in Equestria as a filly? If it is a guy? So going into physical regression folder. If not fee free to correct me and I will switch it back.
2788146 Nah, he only looks like a filly, Rainbow Dash mistaked him to be one.
Fair enough but he regressed in physical age to that of a young colt instead of going there as a ponified stallion, correct? 2788159
2788168 Yes, that's the case.
Then physical regression folder it is, since he is not mentally a child. As for your story, I can't really comment much because it started out so quickly and the chapter ended so quickly. The good news is that I do want to keep reading
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2788191 That's good to know!
I'm going to edit it to be longer.
The story's awesome, can't wait to see more! Although the grammar is a bit meh. Do you want an editor?
You've got an okay start, though you might want to find an editor. There were a few things that could be cleaned up. I will be watching this for the time being.
2788738 Yes, that would be absoutely terrific, I've never been one for noticing my mistakes to often!
2789441 Thank you, I will try to see if I can improve somewhat!
2795885 I'll get on it right away, and PM you them when they're done
2797453 That would be most delightful! Thank you!
so is this one a girly looking bishop boy cause that be just icing on the cake of bad luck but i can think of worse for him
just imagine if he couldn't talk with his new horse mouth proper equestrian at first it be embarrassing to talk all baby at first to learn how to use that mouth right for words and he can understand them ha now that be a bust to a brony pride but a pony is a different species i know i would have a lot of trouble in his shoe's.
but your doing the colt know the langues magic understanding this stuff heck he even know how to walk on four hooves.
Looks like we got us a....
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4043448 Honestly it can't be a cliff hanger if it's not continued. I forgot to take it off the 'Incomplete' and change it to 'Cancelled'.
please update soon
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Just taking a peep for reference.
I can definitely tell that having an editor helped you out plenty, but you might want to give them a credit in the short description rather than the header of the story itself. Arguably, the authors' notes are a good place for them as well, but if we're bringing arguments into the situation we could sit here for weeks trying to make the other see why their choice is inferior. Not that that wouldn't be entertaining
I believe I've confirmed one of my suspicions, however. Yippee for me.