Although Spike has a lot of friends with Twilight and the others, he spends most of the time alone and practically speaking to nopony else except for Twilight, so she gave him a diary so he could express himself and say everything he needs to. What kind of secret thoughts would this dragon have?
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Make the wall text into separated paragraphs and proofread your story.
Other than that, great story!
I wonder about those questions myself. For Applebloom it is more or less a dead give away... no pun intended
, though everyone else is a bit of a mystery. Looks like they got some digging to do and Spike will probably have to talk to Celestia about this.
2735883 Thanks
I know it have a few mistakes, I actually wrote it in a cellphone last night and just uploaded it as it was. I just made a few corrections, but I'll try to make it better. Hope y'all like what is coming =P
2735885 Dead give away... hehehe. Well, Celestia have a few answers, maybe not what Spike wanted but... you want the spoilers?
2736091 No thanks, just analyzing the story so far.
The plot thickens. In all honesty I thought Applebloom's parents would be the easiest but there must be more to it than just them being dead.
And I can only guess when it comes to Scootaloo and Sweetie. As for Spike it could be anything at this point in the story.
And I like how you are trying to make it look like a diary. Keep up the good work.
This is a good story, it has mistakes and seems rushed, but a nice way to thicken a vague plot from the show. Scootaloo's life just sounds dark though, man
MOAR! 
2759609 thanks man. If you mean grammar mistakes and/or design it's because i tried to made it in a way spike would write and in a diary kind of way... it's really hard because I'm sometimes now sure how to acieve it without making him sound too much out of character. Thanks again ^^
Well, you could have him write something like he hates to rush when writing, Diary, sorry, but I have to get this down quickly!
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2759634 True... well you got me there xD
I'll try to keep it in mind if i rewrite it or work on similar projects. Thanks
Well, I will admit I didn't see that one coming.
Can't wait to see what you come up with for the others.
You added Chapter 4, I think by mistake, no one can open it
2762749 Yeah, it was a mistake. But the actual Chapter 4 is out now. Check it out.
Poor Spike
i am gonna go to the room of ''so much information has happened''
good one keep working
Another twist, especially the actors part. Though it looks like Spike is having some problems find parent like figure in his life and Twilights new love relationship with Pinkie isn't helping at the moment. That's two down with two more to go. Hope you can keep the surprises coming.
Hey, good story but you spelled Canterlot wrong. And didn't see that one coming.
2780140 Did I?... Sorry, I sometimes write the story in a rush or when I got insomnia. I'll check it, thanks man
new chapter in a few
I feel sorry for Spike since he got no leads, might have been abandoned, and Twilight is becoming distant. Though Pinkie is trying to get to know him better. Probably because since she is dating Twilight she wants to be on better terms with Spike.
Oh please Spike don't do anything stupid... that really is a sad situation there.
That was beautiful
Oh and is there MOAR? Or did you forget to mark complete?
2784687 There is still things that can be done with this story and with this format. One could even think that the end of the sixth chapter is only a beginning, I need to think about it first and maybe give it some thought. What would you say?
Scootaloo needs to find who she is
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I thought you forgot about her. Let's say... her past is a little bit more complicated to explain and it might take a while 
This is quite the emotional chapter. Is Spike and Scootaloo going to end up together during this trip?
Or ,let's just look at this in my way. Spike's dragon parents could have left or hide his egg because one parent didn't want him and the other did. So they both killed each other. My guess, think it over.
I shall keep reading!
I would think that being Twilight's assistant, Spike would learn to spell better than that!
Yeah, I've read some stories where that used the Big Mac and Applejack not being siblings, got pregnant with Apple Bloom and whatnot, so it wasn't really a surprise.
Well damn!
Eh, that sounded like a lot of tripe from Twilight.
Another great story in the grave