A Toddler a Day Keeps the Mane Six Away

by Jenstone

Filly Swap

The next day soon came, and it was time to swap fillies. They met in the throne room when it was time to swap.

"Okay, so Pinkie had Luna. Who wants Luna?" Twilight asked. Applejack, who seemed quite unsure, raised her hoof. "Ah'll gladly take 'er today."

Pinkie gave Luna to Applejack.

"Fluttershy and I took care of Celestia. Who wants Celestia?" Twilight asked. This time, Rarity raised her hoof. "I will be a dear and take her!"

Fluttershy gave Celestia to Rarity.

Rainbow Dash wasn't there. "Where's Rainbow Dash?" Fluttershy asked once she noticed. Twilight looked around the room. "Well, let's forget about her for a minute. It's time to go home."
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Rainbow Dash was in her Cloudsdale home. "I'm totally not taking a filly. It'd ruin my awesomeness for a year!" she said. Of course, it wouldn't, but to Rainbow, it would.
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Rarity had made a little throne for Celestia in her shop. She had Celestia model many different outfits for fillies. Celestia didn't seem very happy she was being used for such nonsense, though. Rarity ignored Celestia's scowls as she had her model a rose pink bow that goes in a mare filly's mane.

Celestia snuck off the couch when Rarity was gathering some gems. She explored the shop, knocking over bottles of glue and stacks of paper. Soon enough, she heard Rarity calling for her from the room. Celestia rushed around to hide.

Rarity came into the room Celestia was hiding in. When she saw the knocked over glue and paper, she almost screamed. "Don't worry yourself, Rarity. She is only a baby," Rarity reminded herself. She looked under a table, and when she saw Ceestia she smiled. "There you are! Who are you hiding from sweetie?"

Rarity lifted Celestia up. "I have more clothes for you to model! Isn't that nice?" Rarity said. Celestia ducked her head, but soon enough she found herself inside a princess outfit with a mini tiara. "Aww, you look adorable, sweetie!" Rarity smiled at her design.

Celestia started to cry.

Author's Note:

Taking ideas for the next chapter!
Remember, all rude comment will be deleted! Ideas I do not like will also be removed, but mentioned in my next notes for story ideas for somepony else.

Comments

[NLRscout]

I can totally see Rarity doing that to poor Cele

[HeartsWarmth]

Seems to me that may be in a bit of a rush to get this story done, I'd defiantly try to expand your chapters to increase the amount of filly adorability that takes place. But good luck with it regardless.

2694736
It's their story so it's their choice, it's not like EquestrianMiner is hiding the fact after all, so comment if you want to but be prepared for disappointment! Also (in my opinion) some people's comments should probably on balanced be deleted, if they can't say their opinions politely then they shouldn't say it at all.

[SuperPinkBrony12]

The mane six force both fillies onto Rainbow Dash telling her she has to play a part as well and Rainbow Dash admits she knows nothing about foals.

Or alternatively while at Sweet Apple Acres LuLu gets a magic surge and starts causing havoc.

[Crashie]

In my opinion, it seemed kind of rushed. But, meh, the story is pretty good. My idea about Applejack taking care of Princess Luna: Princess Luna was crying because she was hungry. Applejack was trying to feed her a bottle, but she doesn't want any. But then, Applejack was thinking about giving her some applejuice, and she was thinking: Should Ah NOT give her the juice, or should Ah do so?. She was really confused, but she looked at crying Luna again. She didn't want her to keep crying and starve. So she gave her the applejuice in the bottle. Luna did want that applejuice. She drunk it all, really fast. She must of been very thirsty. But she was still crying, though. Then, Applejack gave her some applesauce. She fed Luna the applesauce. Then she waited a few minutes for Luna to respond. Luna didn't do anything. She didn't cry. She just stared at Applejack, and Applejack stared back. Then Applejack picked her up, saying: "Wow, you must like applejuice and applesauce," She chuckled. "Maybe Ah can give ya' some later on in the afternoon!"

If you want, I can maybe help you with the story on Rainbow.

[PrincessLunaMoon]

I think you should have an editor, and i'd be willing to help. just message me, and i can take care of it. i can also give you some behavioural ideas and storyline plot ideas too. only if you want me to, that is

[Hazy Answer]

Looks fun, but it feels rushed. Maybe you could add more information on why the mane 6 are there, what this training session is for and the reactions of the various characters. Also you should start a new line every time someone new speaks.

Incidentally, have you seen My little alicorn? It has a vaguely similar premise, so you could probably get some inspiration from it.

2695317
Please don't write in pink again. All you're doing is making your comment hard to read, which means many people (possibly even the author) will ignore it.

[Wonderstruck]

2694736 I think the author is referring to comments more along the lines of "I hate this story" or "you suck at writing" (this is not my opinion btw, I really do like this story :) ). You know, comments that aren't nice or, even if they are mean, they aren't helpful at all.

[Jenstone]

2695220 I like that first part. Lol. I'll maybe use that soon in a future chapter, and I'll give you credit!

[Jenstone]

2695211 Missing, huh? I like that idea. Give me more! You have great and funny ideas. Would you like to help with the story and some of my others? I'll message you my email if you'd like to help.

[Prince Ecosis]

More chapters please?

[sakuralovelight]

LOL LOVE IT hope to read more soon

[Autum Breeze]

of course rarity would do that. why am i even surprised?

maybe you could delve into how celestia and luna are thinking, seeing things from their perspective.

wait. who's raising the sun and moon?

will favourtie for now and hope for more, with longer chapters