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This chapter, particularly the last scene, was interesting. I'm not sure whether to feel happy or sad for Pirouette. She seems a lot more possessed of her usual personality afterward than anypony else that was affected by the smoke's persuasiveness (possibly we see more of her in her natural state than the others Mr. Deal has had his way with?), and I think that's where there's conflict for me regarding how to feel about what happened with her. There was another story in which a similar mind-control plot device was used, and it too had the result of keeping the target's personality intact, just enforcing the will of the user on top of that. I had similar feelings on that note, so it could just be a function of well-done mind control.
So to that end, I shall continue to follow this!
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Mind if I ask for the name of that story?
This smoke is pure evil. I feel sorry for Done and all the mares... This chapter reassures me that Done isn't actually himself anymore. It's like magical lobotomy.