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This...
Just...
This...
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I'll take that as a compliment.
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That was a compliment. You did good son. You did good.
Hah, His Thralls still manage to one up him, good chap bro.
This has to be one of the best clop scenes of this story yet. And no, I promise I'm not exaggerating that. In particular, the way you had DD subtly guide Deep's own advances, the way he had to take it slowly for a while before letting things heated up. The couple times when Deep spoke a little hesitantly because she wasn't quite indoctrinated enough, before caving in and following DD's direction. The way DD had to play the hand he was dealt and follow along as much as he could exhibit control because he didn't have the power to force anything.
The entire scenario itself, of a masseuse being made to please him sexually. Especially the control trigger, "make you feel good".
Oh man it's all just so damn perfect.
Also, I really enjoyed that little bit at the end, where Jade and Bruises are both swatting each other's hooves away when they get a little too tempted. It's a funny mental picture, of DD talking to Day (there are a lot of names that start with D in this story all of a sudden) while the other two are trying to keep themselves in check.
It all fits together really well, I love that dynamic.
Bravo, Distant. Absolutely excellent chapter.
Sisters! Oh yes~!
You did excellent with the very sensual massage.
Great chapter. Would love to read more of the story^^ Good work
I have had this story open for five days. I have been dragged away by work, school, family. But each time I find myself coming back and becoming just as engaged as I was before. This is a very good story. Its clever, Sexy, and I'm sorry but Bruises is my new favorite.
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Man, and to think, I almost decided against Bruises out of fear that a muscular female would chase away readers. Thanks for the praise, and I'm glad Smoke held your attention so well.
I don't think this warrants a blog post, but I've taken Tender Loving Care out of "pure clop" status. While I never intended to do anything more with Deep Tissue, considering the last sentence of that chapter, I feel it's appropriate to make it a major chapter--the first "season" of Smoke is about Done Deal building up beyond his cabaret, and establishing his first business managed entirely by an employee is relevant. It also lets me lead into the next chapter(s) smoothly.
So, how many of them are pregnant?
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Most likely none of them