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Hehehe...
2803265
Considering there is no tragedy tag and has been stated there will be no gore, and thus likely no death, I doubt it will get too bad. About the only trouble I can think of is the Crystal Pony Coltfriend showing up
2803347
Eh, death doesn't necessarily equate to gore; it doesn't have to be messy. Asphxyiation, blunt weaponry and stabbing are relatively "clean" kills. Who knows what other tricks the Smoke has, those could be "clean" kills as well.
There will inevitably have to be some form strife if he's going to conquer Manehatten, considering he could barely take on some drunk lout on his own; he'll have to get creative in order to deal with ponies who would object to this burgeoning kingpin.
Also, what tragedy? This is the guy we're rooting for! We want him to enslave lots of ponies; tragic from their perspective but not from his.
2803449
Since it's being discussed...
I really want to emphasize before I write what comes next that Smoke is not going to be heavy on physical violence. It'll likely crop up in a few places, when I feel like it makes sense and advances the plot or helps define a character, but right now, I only envision a handful of physical altercations.
I hope to offer the occasional surprise to readers, but I don't want any nasty shocks. By and large, problems will be solved with domination or manipulation, but I DO expect I'll be writing a few more fights. The bloodiest I'll let this story get, and it may not even come to this, is a nasty, deep cut requiring first aid. More serious "clean" injuries are possible, but they will absolutely not be graphically depicted, if I decide to involve any at all. "He screamed, and I winced at the angle of so-and-so's wing--they'd never fly again," is possible (but not planned). Sentences describing bone protrusions for the same situation? Never gonna happen. Not my style.
Edit: Chapter 8 teaser: Done's help for physical altercations gets introduced in the next chapter...
2803542
Calling it now. Either somepony Big Mac Sized, Snowflake/Roid Rage built, or a ninja.
2803664" agreed "
2803664
<_<
One of those is actually correct. That it was that predictable made me consider scrapping my plan, but it'd mean changing a lot, so I'll just have to hope what I do with the character and how I write it are satisfying despite being guessable.
2804856
Are we going to see Gilda or a female griffon oc in Deal's Harem? I would like that if that happen.
2814067
I don't want to give spoilers, however when I originally announced this story over on Sleepychan, I did promise the inclusion of gryphons at some point. They're a reasonable way out, so you'll need to be patient, but they're important to the story as planned.
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Gryphons are very underrepresented in clopfics, I'd love to see one here!
Done Deal is going to be quite the multicultural player!