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Scootaloo is living as best she can in the city of Trottingham. Sure, she's alone, but that suits her just fine. Everypony who has ever come into her life has left her. She's not going to make the same mistakes again though; she doesn't need anypony.

Meanwhile other residents of the city, recent arrivals and long-time citizens alike, find themselves drawn into Scootaloo's life. There intentions vary from the pure to the sinister, but all Scootaloo wants is for them to go away.

Takes place in an alternate universe where Nightmare Moon's return was delayed.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

I like this. I'm really curious to see how this unfolds. I'm also curious to see how Nightmare Moon's late arrival has its part to play in this. And, finally, I'm looking forward to seeing more! :pinkiehappy:

Hmm. I'm usually not one for Scootaloo orphan stories, but this... this is actually pretty good so far. The ending for this chapter made me lose interest a little (it was a bit boring), but I'm curious as to why that noble-pony is so important.

Good work and keep it up!

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Very good story. Two mustaches para tu. (That means for you in Spanish, in case you didn't know. At least, I think.)
:moustache: :moustache:

I wonder WHO her sister is..maybe one of the mane 6 perhaps? Not RD and AJ obviously here, but someone without siblings like that?

Loving the story, please keep it going.

This isn't half-bad. Do continue.

Also, I'd suggest changing the flashback sequence into italics. I got a little lost until the end of that section.

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Thank you sir, that is some very good advice.

Was the unicorn mare a serial killer or a rapist?

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Neither, interestingly enough; She was motivated by her own personal beliefs. Scootaloo would not have had a good time in her company, though.

The chapters in this fic are just sooo well written, great job ! :pinkiehappy:, im really looking forward for whats to come:pinkiehappy:

Not half bad

OMG cant wait for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

Wow... Did she just die? :rainbowhuh:

I hope not! Total downer ending that would be! And no closure. Leaves a silence that's louder than a thousand cannons.

Now I patiently wait for this to continue...

Very cool. Waiting for the continuation.

You can't leave me hanging on this cliff hanger maaaaannn :fluttershbad:

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