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KaijinZero


I DONT KNOW WHAT I'M FIGHTING FOOOOOOR!

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This story had some errors with grammar and punctuation, but the overall plot was nice. And there were a couple times I almost sort of cried. However, it didn't always make a ton of sense and it could be slightly confusing. But it was still a cute little story.

Great Mother's Day fanfic! It's Twilight Velvet not Midnight.
You know Spike does have a mom.

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i realize this, but for sake of my sanity, i decided to give her a different name. and as for spike not spending mothers day with Celestia or calling Twilight his mom, i decided to go a slightly different route

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Regarding the sadly not making a lot of sense, this is my first one shot, and i kinda have a hard time with a few things about this kind of stuff, mainly how to kee p it from getting very confusing as you've mentioned.

in anycase, thanks for the critique, you get a derpy!:derpytongue2:

Really liked your story man, hope you had a terrific day with your mother as I did.:pinkiesmile:

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oy. i wish i had. i was in a different state, and i still am. its the only reason i've been able to update as frequently.

Big Mac simply nodded and placed a bouquet of flowers in front of their mother's grave.

I'll never understand why everyone wants them to be dead

4566675 hey! i'm not the one who said they get to be dead, thats all Lauren.

4568271 She also said they were never planned. If they would be part of an episode, they would be sales ponies who travel around

4568960 well in any case, they're dead in canon. the two stars in apple family reunion are supposed to represent them.

4569916 Representing =/= being dead

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