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TwiliDragonRin


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"Six little ponies have come to play, one by one they will all pay. Which one will survive? Which one will die? Well....all I know is that they will all suffer a terrible fate."

Based on an amnesia custom story.

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Comments ( 10 )

I swear to christ if you mention Stephano, Piggy, or Jennifer anywhere in this fic I'm going to lose my shit.

Hope you can do good with the premise that's available to you, though.

2564947 is that in a good way or bad way? o.o
don't worry, it is

You should have made it a bit longer.
I was starting to get goosebumps.
:pinkiehappy:

well,i guess in the rhyme she was the one to die:pinkiecrazy:

RD next please...that is if you don't mind:pinkiecrazy:

Also not to rain on your parade but wouldn't applejack hide in one of the wardrobes if she heard something break a door down or did i misunderstand you and there was only one door smash?(if the latter is the case i will apologize for this)

3633944 Well, she didn't know what was going on at the time and it was already too late. And the Brute is too fast to run from

Oh ok sorry bout that we cool:pinkiesmile:

3639470 no need to be sorry ^ ^

grete start but.... what the hell is a candelbra? and wouldn't aj have ran in the opposite dirrection? sure you say "but she didn't know what was going on" but you never said she went far from the door and most sain poneys tend to run when both A:they here the sound of a monster moaning and breaking down the door. and B:when they see this is happening to a door in her immediate area. now again yes she didn't know what was going on but it takes a monster 3 good hits to destroy a door and it takes around 3-8 seconds to deliver said hits thats plenty of reaction time plus you said both monsters came from the same door not from her door so she could have hidden in the closet in the previous room or taken the other hall. not evan mesioning the fact that they can drive you insane by looking at them. wouldn't she have felt woosy or nuaseated a bit? it would explain why she sadly she went full retard here.

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