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Hammered out in a few hours. Self edited. Be kind, but feel free to point out any typos.
That was a great story. It made me tear up a little.
BTW some where you wrote "here" instead of "her".
2564219 Thanks, and fixed.
In all honesty this was a bit of self-therapy for Mother's Day.
Really good. Nothing I can complain about so this story gets a fav and a thumbs up. Only mistake I spotted was at the beginning; grone should be groan. Aside from that, good story.
Nicely done.
only contributions I can make for obligatory Grammar Nazi:
For most part, I saw you didn't do her with the country accent throughout the story, then you should have going--otherwise should have it as goin'
S/B than
As a friend likes to express it, "So long as we remember, they live!" Can't get much more fitting than to say such here
Faved & thumbs up!