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Rocinante


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Hammered out in a few hours. Self edited. Be kind, but feel free to point out any typos.

That was a great story. It made me tear up a little.:fluttercry:
BTW some where you wrote "here" instead of "her".

2564219 Thanks, and fixed.

In all honesty this was a bit of self-therapy for Mother's Day.

Really good. Nothing I can complain about so this story gets a fav and a thumbs up.:pinkiehappy: Only mistake I spotted was at the beginning; grone should be groan. Aside from that, good story.

Nicely done.

only contributions I can make for obligatory Grammar Nazi:

I recon I’ll get goin

For most part, I saw you didn't do her with the country accent throughout the story, then you should have going--otherwise should have it as goin'

Mac’s bigger that you now dad.

S/B than

As a friend likes to express it, "So long as we remember, they live!" Can't get much more fitting than to say such here :ajsleepy:

Faved & thumbs up!:pinkiehappy:

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