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BronieMan305


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When a young hell bound man is given a second chance at life by Discord, he'll have to serve him in a musical way
(Chapter 3 after a 4 year hiatus!)

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Um..interesting idea. If you could keep the character of death in there (i feel there may be potential humor in that) that would be great. A few lengthy sentences here and there, but good overall.

Liked the humour, keep it up with that, but put some apostrophes in there. It kills me to see "couldnt" instead of couldn't :pinkiesick:

Yeah, I'm not gonna read a story with no description...

Interesting idea... But the grammar and spelling can get rather terrible. Not to mention that we haven't a clue on anything
related to that "ability". Can a song about financial depression cause Filthy Rich to go bankrupt?

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Lets put it like this, it has the power of chaos, but it has to be themed, chaos can do anything, therefore whatever happens in a song will happen

I like it so far, though that could be because I am a major music/gaming/evil/death fan... with a strange obsession for colorful ponies, but I say keep going. The premise is nice and the character seems pretty well written (even if the backstory behind him is lacking). You sir have my stamp of approval.
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Okay so its not really mine, sue me!

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Lyra from Background Pony would have a fit if she heard about this. Using music for chaos? Despicable!

No description, no tags, no read.

i admit, this is sort of intersiting. i mean, its not the most intersiting story i've heard, but its decently made. i do see some garmmer errors, but i can't offer to fix it, since you can just tell from this comment that i'm not miriacle worker when it come to garmmer. but, don't stop. its good. also, its a shame that the sells for Darksiders two were low. i mean, i brought, not the collectors edition. i would've but didn't know there was one. however, i never finished the game, because i'm on this boss battle, and hes the one with the drill and i can't kill him. i almost got him once, but i died, and all he needed was one hit and he would've been dead. so unfortenitly, for me, i never finished the dam game. i wish i did, but i didn't. also, going a little off topic here, but when you metion bronies going to hell, i then thought to myself, is there a Brony heaven? a place when bronies die, they go to heaven and its where the MLP characters are at and we become out OC's if we want to.and maybe we live in Equestria, or perhaps we go to the actaul MLP universe and live there. don't know, just throwing ideas around in my head. well, ayways, good job.

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Assuming the multiverse theory is correct they do exist in an alternate universe but I don't think we're gonna be able to get there

2559315 true, which is what i also knew. although, i did made a fanfic about where many other universes exist in a area, and my main character bassically goes through them and goes to the MLP universe and.... whatever. however, i was talking about if it was heaven. to say if god would teleport bronies to the MLP universe, because god is fucking powerful as shit, so i'm guessing he could do that. if not, then my guess would be he would give us a VR of Equestria. but thats to say if theres a brony heaven.

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WHY!!!?!?!?!?! now you have me thinking about it :flutterrage:

2559814 thinking about what? the darksiders thing or the brony heaven thing?

2559972 ahhh.... yes, brony heaven. why are so angery with me with that. i mean, its a good idea. i mean, i'm even building a little personal brony heaven in minecraft. i mean, its just an idea to say that if god liked bronies, which i'm sure he does since we're all love and tolerence and all that good shit and hes alla bout love and tolerence and love thy enemy..... why am i saying shit from the bible? well, anyway, i'm just saying that maybe he would give us bronies a little persoanl heaven of MLP, where we could be our OC's if we want to, which would be awesome. or even meet our OC's.

:derpyderp1: Idk why xD

Sounds pretty cool though.

2558759 aren't we all music/gaming/evil/death fans?

oh crap! i almost forgot about the ponies... and warhammer

I have two things to say. 1. Amazingly amazing. 2. I fuckin hit the thumbs down button,Noooooooo!

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You do realize you can hit the thumbs up button AFTER hitting the tums down button and change your vote right?

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Did you fall for the build-up making it look like he was thinking of an old girlfriend :twilightsheepish:

Good old Adventure time reference. I have no idea how to put the heads on this thing......

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YAY YOU GET THE SNEAK PEAK! I'll give you that as soon as there is one. :derpytongue2:

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What do you mean put the heads on this thing?

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It should be directly to the right of where you type comments and click on the faces :ajbemused::ajsleepy::ajsmug::applecry::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::coolphoto::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::ajsleepy::flutterrage::fluttershyouch::pinkiesmile::trixieshiftright::duck:

2627186 Wha? well,I got a lot of stories to go thumb up then!

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I did that on an old story and it got shut down for 'copywriting'

2558753 songs imbued with power like these three songs
oath to order

song of healing

song of time

according to the story concept alone...

you got an insta-fav and an insta-like!
they're very valuable in large quantities.

i'll read this ASAP!

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Do you reply to every comment with video game music?

2659088 not always...

sometimes I only use words or include a video of an emote-like nature like this

or this

after all, if a picture is worth 1000 words, what would a video be worth?

oh and if you're worried about my comments causing slowdown or making the webpage crash, don't because i make sure it won't by any and all means which includes the deletion of my comments.

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Have you read that story cupcakes? I read that while eating a cupcake ironically. After reading I got another one. Im fucked up

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Have you read that story cupcakes?

i haven't because while i love dark stories i don't like gore.

but hey, it could be worse.

oh shoot! i just instigated Murphy's Law!

RUN!

So... 3 songs
-(i dunno lol)
-thrift shop
-fireflies

AMAZING

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