I like the post capture angle for this chapter.

Finally somepony delt with Angel in the right way.

« She fingers tried… » You probably meant « Her fingers tried ».

While I love Angel trapped inside Fluttershy, it too me a while to realize that Angel was transformed, instead of just stuffed in there. =3

Yay, it updated!
Thanks for that, NeverClever. I missed this story.

4404450 Thanks, fixed.
4414437 Added a sentence after the time skip to hopefully make it clearer

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4419067 Thank you

The best has to be pinkie and the worst so far is fluttershy's come on man your better than that the applejack one better blow my fuckin socks off

It's crazy how its longer than the first chapter but it seems shorter. And also the whole going around town with a vibrator in her is not new (it's in like 50% of hentai) but its ok its still a good idea..... But where you lost me was the whole angle thing I mean that's just weird and a boner killer

4428377 Two other characters were turned into stuff in chapter two, and they were shown to have a similar level of consciousness as Angel in this chapter.

4429487 nope your right I had to reread most of 2 and it was better than one because its both rarity and pinkie but also the first was pinkie geting addicted to cum and rarity's is haveing enough consciousness to fight back and know whats happening and want to help here friends but not have the power to. So to me rarity's is more darker but I can still get into it. also your descriptive skills a good in that chapter. But the fluttershy one it feels weird like you didn't tell about the events leading up to fluttershy's whole predicament like even if its a flash back to when it happend that would be good, there would have been some gold in that part of the story, (like I wanted to know how she got like that) but no, it seems like you rushed to get fluttershy's part over and then you had to have some sort of action happen so you put in the alley seen where ether right there or where trixie said "do you remember" are perfict places to put a flashback like I stated earlier. But that's just how I feel.

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Are we going to see a chapter where Trixie transform Applejack into her boobs like in this pic:
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For the full version of this pic just reverse search image the pic in images google you will find the full version.

4496076 Probably not--I was never a big fan of body transformation. I can see why people like it, but it usually ends up striking me as a little boring

Well, it was certainly interesting. I liked what you did with Angel and he whole situation somehow suits Fluttershy's character. Although, I really can't wait to read what Trixie is going to do with Applejack, I'm waiting for this since I started to read this story

why is your clop so good? whats your secret?

Can't wait for the next chapter

Dame she knows!

this is turning into a good story I wonder what will happen to Applejack and will Twilight be able to save her friends

5136938 This was actually the first story I published on this account, and it was definitely more of a testing ground. I was (and still am) figuring how to write porn not bad, and it definitely shows in the more IKEA nature of this fic. My guess is that the Rarity chapter was the least terrible because it places less emphasis on the act of sex (which is pretty hard to write) and more on the fetish-y buildup (which runs less risk of being overwrought/inaccurate).

Also fun fact; the theme for each chapter was "which goofy fetish should I try next?" Now that you've pointed out otherwise, however, it makes the applecow chapter I was considering next oddly apropos

Applecow? hmm...What if Applejack had a bit of a literal Mind Fuck?

Wow, I really hope you didn't forget about this story, it's too good to be just left like that. It's probably my fav clopfic on FimFiction!

Update?

It's dead

6271248 Nope

It's dead.

6346008 well that's too bad :/ ....

i will miss you wonderful story

6492722 6424448 6346008 Try one of my other stories; they're all pretty much the same thing

6493007 ..mm they don't appear to be the same things at all....

6494554 grimderp smut involving mind control and/or transformation? Sounds similar to me

6495259 oh well when you put it like that , though only 1 other fic involves transformation in it's tags (not counting the mini fics) , but aside from those everything else about the other fics appears to be different....

This is my first like and fav on the site. Also, still cleaning up the mess on my bed because of it. You should be very proud of this work.

If you're not making more of these, can you direct me to more "Futa Trixie having surreal sex"?

Sorry bad english, still learning.

8205174 Nothing comes immediately to mind, sorry. There's plenty of surreal/goofy/preposterous sex in my other fics, though without Trixie. The Also Liked bar or my favorites list may offer some similar options.

Also; I wouldn't have known English was your second language if you hadn't mentioned anything. Read fine to me

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A reply, recommendations and even nice?

You're great, we should mate.