One and a half? I'm not sure, but I think I should be... impressed? It's not every day I hear that someone cummed half a time.

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I started with the story and finished with something else. Mighta been more 60/40.

And it's actually pretty easy (though not always pleasant) to get halfway there and stop, especially if you're into orgasm denial. Getting partway there, stopping, and repeating that process is a common denial tactic.

2531033 aaah, I see. Well that makes a lot more sense than what I was thinking.

Is there gonna be watersports?

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One of my goals is to include as many fetishes as possible, excluding scat and foals (because ew), to see if I can break Equestria After Dark's kink lists.

Watersports is undecided. I guess it coulda gone in this chapter, too late now.

Ah, wonderful. Another great chapter and so soon! Can't wait for more, this is great.

We are not sure about scat but we are open to all other fetish thou wishes to play with.

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I do and most of the time the story ends with bad guy dying or getting raped as punishment. I don't want another luna's lunacy on my hands (basically nmm raping the mane six taking over equestria only for twilight to win in the end) i just want trixie to win is that so wrong.

Awesome update, mate. :D

Also, more fetishes? That's cool, though the first chapter was one of my favorites. I'll still follow where this is going, as the story itself is just as intriguing. (ifyouknowwhatimean.jpg)

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Try the Mind Control group; lotta bad endings in thar.

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Yes, nothing like a good "plot" winkwinknudgenudge

Oh boy 100 favorites. I'd almost feel proud, except, well, you know.

In just over a day this vapid porn-splosion has beaten out most of the stories on my SFW account, save the ones featured on EQD (and even one of those). Internet, you crazy.

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look im just worried that this will be like "like a sex machine" all over again

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No, I don't won't be doing an Indecisive Parody or a half-assed alternate ending as Like a Sex Machine did.

Since this fic has no plot whatsoever I haven't planned anything, thus I can't give you a real answer. I will say I quite enjoy kinky bad endings (within reason), so prolly where it's headed.

yes i love the idea of trixie winning

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Gonna bring some vore in as well?
Not that scat and watersports isn't enough

I give all my loves for this story. expectantly the tags since theres no dark im glad to know this will end on a happy note.

So, is Rarity wearing Mr, and Mrs. Cake and Pinkie as clothes now?

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Just the Cakes; the pink part is Mrs. Cake's mane

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As mentioned here tags are subject to change 2529655 And if you read Obsidian Raindrop's comments you'll note that "bad guy wins without consequences" is a "happy note" for some people

I feel a need for tentacles!
Particularly the all-the-way-through, ovipositing kind of tentacles.
Please?

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I completely, utterly, 100% agree with this idea!
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Oh! Good thing I re-read this reply, because the first time I thought you WERE going to include scat. Woo, no poo!

Yay, I love it when they resist~

[Renegade +10]

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If they've gone all the way through then what would be the point of laying eggs? They'd just flop out the other end

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You can, of course, have more than one tentacle. The more, the merrier! Some go for complete pen, others go for the egg-layin.

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Touché.

I have no idea what my eyes just read.
So I have decided to simply grunt ambiguously
Hrm...

Trixie is having a lot of fun, and so are Pinks and Rarity. Time for Rainbow Dash or Luna!

THERE ARE NO BRAKES ON THE RAPE TRAIN

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No conductor either.

If only because of your awesome avatar of Haruhi Suzumiya, I approve!

2540772 my thoughts exactly.

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its good hen- i mean clop

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You decide.

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Optimist. 14 is way too high a number for the amount of sane people on this site.

2531099 watersports is similar to scat, though if you want to see the top of the dark kink list try out this story. let me tell you it is beyond insane and definitely will turn a few stomachs

2624145 They're not really that similar. They both may be biological waste products, but (healthy) urine is typically sterile while poop is not. Also, textures and all that.

I tried reading that story, but the writing was so bland I stopped before I got to any of the allegedly stomach-churning things. Call me weak-willed if you like.

2626190 eh all in the eye of the beholder.

2626200

What's in the eye of the guy holding bees?

2531099
Clothes transformation stories you don't see often this site need more.

2531033 I keep forgetting the stopping part..

2626190 to be honest, i was hoping for more of a friendly type of situation where it was by each characters own mind, Mind rape just doesn't turn me on like it would if it were the characters willingly let them selves lose control without being hit with a spell, i prefer it to be natural. no offense but its a little too much for me to be turned on by it.

That ponies-become-clothes thing was original and interesting. As far as I'm concerned, it was the the high point of the fic; what follows feels somewhat weak in comparison. But I'm starting to get the theme: getting the characters to do the opposite of what they normally would. Pinkie is an apathetic, wordless slob, Rarity is horribly-dressed, Fluttershy is an audacious exhibitionist, Rainbow Dash is impotent and immobile.

Unfortunately, those other concepts aren't as well-executed as this one; the sacrilegous profanation of it, its defacement of beauty and dignity, just doesn't come across as well. Also, the descriptions of the tentacle-dick through Rainbow became frankly and literally unimaginable after a while, especially if one knew their biology. Guts do not WORK that way, even when A Wizard Did It. Plus, RD's physical breaking just wasn't as interesting as the more intellectual sorts we've seen before, and Fluttershy's suffers from having the beginning be truncated, completely skipping over the despair and struggle part that is, I feel, the essence of this fic.

Try harder, Clever. There's no shame in writing porn, even evil, cruel, soul-crushing porn. But you gotta do it as good as you can, man!

My mind hurts,

I think I have mind cancer,

It's hurting my ideas

I clopped one-and-a-half times while writing this.

Me too!
Brohoof! /)

...brohoof? No...? ...ok...