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Nov
17th
2021

Whatever Happened to Those Stories I Promised? · 9:22pm Nov 17th, 2021

Hello again! Been way too long, hasn't it?

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Mar
5th
2016

How is this for a two-part opening? · 8:44pm Mar 5th, 2016

Dinner Dash was going to die. This he was fully convinced of, for around him from all angles came angry blasts of thaumic energy, vengeful volleys of swift arrows, ravenous swarms of parasprites, and the otherworldly shriek of mortar shells. Those were supposed to be illegal. The GELPNO (Greater Equus, Let's Play Nice, Okay?) Treaty was signed into law 576 years ago. After the catastrophic destruction witnessed during the War of Daisies and Oats, even the most callous of nations

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Jun
12th
2015

How Is This For a Story Opening? · 6:42pm Jun 12th, 2015

I'm working on "Show, not tell," and "Introduce details slowly through the plot rather than exposition dump". Story title and description in first comment.

Monday

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Dec
5th
2016

Insulting a creation, but not the creator. · 7:29pm Dec 5th, 2016

First of all, for those on you wanting an update on MLAABQ, lemme just quickly tell you that chapter 15 looks like it's gonna be out next Friday (clarification: that means this Friday), with around 10k words. End of MLAABQ-news.

Now:

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Jul
7th
2017

Anyone there? · 9:49am Jul 7th, 2017

So... I'm halfway through writing the next chapter, and I'm wondering, is there anyone actually reading my stuff?

Is there anyone enjoying it?

And what can I do to improve?

Dec
15th
2015

Do you wanna read my fanfic~! · 11:14pm Dec 15th, 2015

Fimfiction?
*Knock, Knock, Knock*

Do you wanna read my fanfiiiiic~!?
Come on let's go and read!
I hardly see feedback anymore,
come out the door.
It's like they've gone away.

we're totally best buddies,
and now I write.
I wish I could tell you whyyyy~!
Do you wanna read my fanfic?
It doesn't have to be a slash fic.

Fimfiction: Lucky, go away.

Okay, Byeeeee.

Aug
21st
2020

Asking for Feedback · 8:37am Aug 21st, 2020

So I’m going to more or less get straight to the point with this one. I’ve been writing for around two years now, and I struggle with getting any kind of regular comments on the majority of my stories. It’s starting to get to me a lot more than it used to, and I really just need feedback. Writing is my way of relieving stress from my day to day life, and life’s been rougher than usual lately. As a result, I’ve been getting more attached to my writing than I usually am. I’ve been trying so hard

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Mar
21st
2016

Disclaimers · 1:27am Mar 21st, 2016

This is a general writing disclaimer of sorts...

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Feb
1st
2021

Reviewer's mansion Promotion! · 3:30pm Feb 1st, 2021

Hello, every pony it is officially Feburary, and we've survived the first month of 2021. Today, I don't have an interview for you all, however I do have a promotion, and a few things I'd like to say. Without further ado here we go.

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Jan
20th
2017

When someone asks me about writing · 9:17pm Jan 20th, 2017

This has actually happened! More than once! :pinkiegasp:
Me being asked for advice on writing. Who would've thought? :derpytongue2:

So a new chapter, and as of the moment of writing this: twenty one upvotes, three downvotes. It's better than when I got up this morning, but still, tut tut. Seven to one? Can’t have that. Gotta step up my game for the next chapter :rainbowdetermined2:

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Jun
9th
2016

A Call for Assistance · 11:02pm Jun 9th, 2016

Aileron. I've talked about it for the past year or so in the occasional blogpost, aye? For better or for worst, it's going to hit Fimfic sometime this summer. I'm currently working with an artist regarding cover art, I've been working through editing stages and fixing scenes that had to change back when I removed a major plotpoint, but it's getting there.

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Sep
11th
2018

Pharynx Attempts to Get on EqD, Mission Debriefing. · 8:21am Sep 11th, 2018

Quick update.

You may know I tried to submit Pharynx Goes Monster Hunting to Equestria Daily. Well, after a month or so, as expected, I got a response.

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Sep
6th
2020

Chapter Update - Do Ponies on Earth Have Magic Dreams? · 6:02pm Sep 6th, 2020

Today’s chapter update is a little shorter and more slice of life, but it at least sets up a couple of motivations for a character that’ll come back in later. I’ve also updated some of the tags to better reflect the story, and the rating’s been changed because ultimately it didn’t really need a teen rating, which was just a holdover from its original incarnation. As always, I’m always looking for feedback so feel free to give it a read and tell me what you thought of it!

Nov
5th
2021

Update on "Equestria's Martial Warrior" · 4:37am Nov 5th, 2021

Hey guys! Hasn't been long, but I have news on the story.

So to start off, I've gone through all of the starting chapters (1-4) and edited them to be more up to par with what I want. Before, they were missing much detail and intricate tid-bits that were, in my opinion, much needed. It makes the story a lot more immersive and "hooks" the reader, as the first few chapters should.

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Feb
23rd
2022

I've finished writing the story · 1:19am Feb 23rd, 2022

Hey there, everyone. The upcoming story is already done, but before I start publishing it, I need some feedback to tell me what needs to be fixed as a whole. Unfortunately, I couldn't find anyone else to help me, so I decided to make a blog to ask if anyone would want to help me. If not, then just tell me why and I'll stop asking entirely as well as just publish it anyway.

Feb
28th
2020

Fireteam Freelance Episode 2 Update and Episode 1 Discussion · 10:37pm Feb 28th, 2020

Update time! Episode two, titled Blackout, will not be posting tomorrow. It’s about halfway done, though, so look for it next week. What’s episode two about? Well, it involves a new job (shocker!) and … the Mexican Orbital Elevator?

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Jun
2nd
2020

First Story, First Beginnings... · 8:28am Jun 2nd, 2020

So I have posted the first story I have ever worked on, and I require feedback if you would be so kind. I have no idea how this will turn out, but I plan to make this story part of a new series of sorts, all stories featuring Axel. Also, if you don't get how the book works or the potential it has, it should all be explained in the future.

Anyways, enjoy!

Have a nice day!

Feb
10th
2022

A Ratio Approaching One and G5 - Ideas and Feedback Requested · 5:39am Feb 10th, 2022

In an earlier post, years ago by now I am certain, I discussed some other story ideas I wanted to try out. One of these was what I called "A Ratio Approaching One," where certain scenes/episodes of FiM were re-imagined in an Equestria where the ratio of mares to stallions was closer to 1:1. A different take from the usual Rule 63 story where it's all flipped for everyone. The main point was to explore the different social dynamics that would be brought about if only some of the cast were born

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Aug
13th
2020

Sequel Plot Idea, don't read if you want to remain spoiler free! · 9:15pm Aug 13th, 2020

WARNING!

MIGHT POSSIBLY CONTAIN SPOILERS FOR THE SESQUEL!!

DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT ANYTHING RUINED!!

So the closer we come to the ending of this current story, the more I am starting work and planning for it's sequel. One of the ideas I have been playing around with lately is the question to how they got to Daniel's human world, our world.

Now, this can have multiple answers, and one of these possibilities is this one.

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Jan
13th
2018

Need Help with Patreon · 12:38am Jan 13th, 2018

Please watch the video and provide me with some feedback.

If you've had experience with Patreon, your feedback would be greatly appreciated (especially if you also do Youtube Readings).

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