Update on "Equestria's Martial Warrior" · 4:37am Nov 5th, 2021
Hey guys! Hasn't been long, but I have news on the story.
So to start off, I've gone through all of the starting chapters (1-4) and edited them to be more up to par with what I want. Before, they were missing much detail and intricate tid-bits that were, in my opinion, much needed. It makes the story a lot more immersive and "hooks" the reader, as the first few chapters should.
Now, the second thing I wanted to mention was the main page for the story. I changed the description to give a better idea to the reader of what's in store for the story. Right now where it's at, it's very unclear of where I'm going, so I hope that helps you guys out.
As for the rating, I decided to change it to teen, as the only things really pushing it to mature would be gore and the sight drug use. But it doesn't seem substantial enough for that so I bumped it down, as it's not a focal point. I also took off some tags, as they were unwarranted unbeknownst to me. I also changed it to comedy, since I felt slice of life wouldn't fit later chapters.
Finally, I found work, so I'm not sure how much I'll be able to pump out, but believe me, this story means a lot to me, so don't expect too much change. I'm excited to see where Leo's journey takes us! :)
Alright, that's it from me guys! If there are any questions, let me know! PEACE! ✌
Didn’t read the story yet but if you ever need any help (whether an editor or proofreader), I can be a helping hand
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Sweet! I appreciate it!