Plans for "Equestria's Martial Warrior" · 10:45pm Oct 23rd, 2021
So I just wanna say, Thanks to those of you who have been reading my story. It's my first time writing anything like this. Most of the time before, I used to hold in these ideas I had, but I decided to finally share it with people, both with those of you on this site, and the people I know from IRL. Also, now that I've started using "Grammarly," the quality of writing has gone up noticeably, (I used it for chapter 5 and went back and re-edited the first 4) so I hope everyone looks forward to that.
So to start, honestly, for being my first work, this story is VERY ambitious. Just to reiterate, in the last chapter as of writing this (Chapter 5), the story takes place about a week or so before the first episode of MLP: FiM. Now, although I plan to follow along with the main plot points of the show, I also plan to expand on the world with Leo going out to train/explore. So for example, I'll skip filler or side stuff that Leo isn't participating in since he won't be there (since it's from his perspective anyway). I don't know how it's gonna be with the updates, but I'll try my best to make it to where there'll be at least be one chapter out a week.
Now the power system, which will be minor spoilers so, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!! It's very heavily inspired but Martial World, so there are stages of cultivation Leo will reach. I've written out my own stages of cultivation and the changes in his body that will occur whenever he reaches a new stage. The only thing is that, since it isn't those stories about immortals and gods, there are no treasures and plants to help the cultivation bottlenecks. So to counteract, I made it make sense in the world of MLP, which is all I will say for now.
The overall goal of this story is to help me improve, and put something out for the few who'll enjoy it. Also, let me know if you do enjoy it, and what parts and why, I'm genuinely curious (helps keep me driven and know what I'm doing good 
). Now, I have a few changes to the overarching story that aren't in the MLP show that I know everyone will look forward to, but that's for y'all to read and not for me to tell. I hope everyone looks forward to the future of this story, that's all for now! (Also, look forward to Leo having some more shameless shenanigans 
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P.S. I'm going to go back and edit chapter 1 to make the spacetime madness better paced, because I know I went too fast there. I might also go back and add images like how I had in Chapter 5, lmk ur opinion on those. Also, gonna add to groups soon.
-Sincerely, your friend,
Charson
Looking forward to yer next chapter
Personally, I thought you did pretty good in the first chapter with the spacetime-madness. It was a nice touch when you added the fact that he flew past some Outer-Gods during the experience.
Side note, I'm already shipping Leo with Rainbow Dash. I just love the little dynamic between them so far.
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'appreciate the support!
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I'm glad you like the scenes with those two, they were so fun to write! 😂 Also, hold that thought on the outer gods