Sep

2nd

2020

Fireteam Freelance: A Creator’s Look Back · 7:49pm Sep 2nd, 2020

Full post is here! It's a big one!

All right guys, I’ll level with you right from the start.

I wasn’t actually that impressed by Fireteam Freelance.

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Jul

24th

2019

Bad Book Review 10 (The Guardian, Chapter 12) · 8:20pm Jul 24th, 2019

Just keep readin'. Just keep readin'.

Last time, our killer angel, Gabriel, went after Christina in her home, only to be stopped by Cameron. He then used his powers on a woman named Tammi, who tried to seduce Father Stephen, then killed herself in front of him when that failed.

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Apr

20th

2016

Critique Review: Escaped Forest or a Curse Whale · 7:27pm Apr 20th, 2016

Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Dec

16th

2015

Critique Review: One Hearth's Warming Eve · 9:01pm Dec 16th, 2015

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Oct

7th

2015

Nightmare Month: The Tail of Endless Night · 8:01pm Oct 7th, 2015

Hello, my children of the night. I am the Critique! And welcome to the first day of… Nightmare Month!

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Jun

10th

2015

Critique Review: Rainbows at Twilight · 3:09pm Jun 10th, 2015

Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Jan

27th

2016

Mykanuary: Starfleet Magic: THE MOVIE · 6:24pm Jan 27th, 2016

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Feb

8th

2019

Life update · 10:59pm Feb 8th, 2019

Haven't written much for the story- tend to do that on late Fridays and weekends when busy. Plan on destroying this thing by the end of the month due to my mom going on a trip for about a week and leaving me mostly alone besides taking care of my floofy dog and cooking food somehow.

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Sep

23rd

2015

Sequel September: Soren the Alicorn 2 · 3:23pm Sep 23rd, 2015

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Aug

19th

2015

Critique Review: The Disney 7 · 5:02pm Aug 19th, 2015

Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Nov

21st

2016

things to cum... · 6:17am Nov 21st, 2016

Someone else has to have used that pun already I'm sure.

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Jul

11th

2016

MommAdagio - Mid-Story Analysis · 1:31am Jul 11th, 2016

Hello everyone! While I was writing the other day, I curiously thought of the fair share of the story's likes and dislikes, and I think the best way to approach this is to personally ask a detailed criticism from each of my readers. If I could take a little bit of everyone's time to provide their own detailed criticism, that'd be be much appreciated.

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May

24th

2016

College Essays Suck · 12:53am May 24th, 2016

Get them done near the end of your junior year. It sucks but it's worth it. Like I said before I suck at writing actual stories but I can write English essays pretty well. My English teacher, notorious for roasting people on their college essays, approved of mine on the second try. Maybe if I ever have a lot of time on my hands, I can contribute to the fandom by writing critical essays. Or I can roast help you guys with your English papers. My sister knew a

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Dec

15th

2015

Two chapters in the works! · 4:27am Dec 15th, 2015

So the next installment of the story is nearly finished, and the following chapter is being written, literally. I don't think I've ever said this, but I do write the story out and then transcribe it onto my computer.

In terms of content, these two chapters will be tied together. Without giving too much away, there will be an allusion to another Final Fantasy in these chapters.

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Jul

6th

2023

Rosebud Frozen Peas · 5:25am Jul 6th, 2023

I found this by dumb luck the other day and I'm still laughing about it.

It's a little-known fact that after stepping down as head of the EEA, Chancellor Neighsay decided to try and pursue a new career. One of his first attempts was to try and break into acting, with rather mixed success.

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Sep

15th

2016

Did I actually tag my story correctly? · 1:50am Sep 15th, 2016

I'm curious as to what you guys have to say, because for all I know it could be horribly wrong. :I

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Apr

9th

2021

Hows the book going so far · 12:51pm Apr 9th, 2021

What are yall's opinions on the book so far? Any criticism would do wonders for me, I've also been going back to previous chapters and modifying them ever since I got that second dislike because I wanted to self-diagnosis the problem. So if anyone who could tell me why you don't like it would be appreciated

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Feb

9th

2016

Ratings on "I Just Need Some Time..." · 8:24pm Feb 9th, 2016

I've noticed that in the short time that my newest story, "I Just Need Some Time...", has been uploaded, it's got some very... Negative ratings, polar opposite of what we'd call reassuring; so my question is this:

Is the writing itself bad, or are people just upset with the dark nature of the story?