Feb
9th
2016
Ratings on "I Just Need Some Time..." · 8:24pm Feb 9th, 2016
I've noticed that in the short time that my newest story, "I Just Need Some Time...", has been uploaded, it's got some very... Negative ratings, polar opposite of what we'd call reassuring; so my question is this:
Is the writing itself bad, or are people just upset with the dark nature of the story?
Leaving your personal opinion (whether it be harsh, or just constructive criticism) would really make my day, as it helps a writer improve. Thanks in advance!
~Mega T22
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Well I will read it real quick and let you know. I already have it in my read later list.
I found nothing wrong its sad. Maybe you should have used "mare" instead of women a time or two.
3743739 Thanks very much for taking time out of your day to do that c:
I will edit out those kinks in the story when I next get the chance.
Your answering to my call of help is much appreciated.
3744239 Its all good. I like the story it was sad but still good. I feel for Spike I have all but jumped. Young love is the hardest to manage. My jump was a stick of dynamite! LOL I was going to blow myself up along with her. 30 years ago or so I am old.
3744257 My, oh my! I would hope great recovery has occurred over those 30 years!
Glad to know that things never quite turned out that way, and I hope everything turned out for the better for you.
Personally, I know not of any dark struggles, romantic, nor emotional, but I read upon them lots, since it interests me, so I can't really pretend to understand. I can just give my hope.
3744265 Yes it has. Hey if you ever need a proof reader let me know. I read about 100,000 words a day here. Plus I have seen and been a lot of shit in my 47 years on the world. So if I can help I am more than willing.
3744274 That would be appreciated, a new friend is always welcome in my life. I'll be sure to hit you up if I ever do need that help, or decide I need something proofread/edited. Thank you for the offer c: